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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv148mth
2024-05-25 04:13

Not a fan of villian stories. not against villians but their origin stories are just forced and make no sense or about someone abused whos to weak not to lash out at the world for his circumstances, so I've given up on em, at least on this app. however, I like the author, probably one of the more passionate and committed writers on this app! I use to be a pat reon member. if you write any stories with a different MC let me ill definitely be first to read it! good luck! Should definitely give his stories a chance before moving on.

Son Of The Savage (a DC Comics SI)

Saintbarbido
4.3
65 Chs

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Saintbarbido
SaintbarbidoAuthor

Thanks a lot for a great review. It means a lot. And I do indeed have a story I'm working on in P@treon. I'm planning on releasing it in a month or so. Check out Fated Chaos, the first 5 chapters are free!

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RajehAbdullah
RajehAbdullahLv14

How many is his harem ? I kinda like the whole premise but i don’t really like reading a more than 4 women harem stories

Saintbarbido:Thanks a lot for a great review. It means a lot. And I do indeed have a story I'm working on in P@treon. I'm planning on releasing it in a month or so. Check out Fated Chaos, the first 5 chapters are free!
8mth
Tomas_Sereno
Tomas_SerenoLv4

please update aden strong: avatar in dc and in dc with the pet pet devil fruit

8mth
maggi_iggam
maggi_iggamLv4

lost interest as soon as I read haram bs,spoil good story for no reason

1mth
Damian_Kotero
Damian_KoteroLv12

Great idea for this story I really enjoyed your avatar book, gunna try the Jon Kent one, but this book of savages son sounds amazing wish it had more chapters lol 😆 💯💪🏽

1mth
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FujiwaraNoMokou
FujiwaraNoMokouLv4

In my humble opinion, it would've been more exciting to read the MC not aiming for World Domination that early. Really, its just 10 chaps in, but still..."Father hurt me so I hurt others too before hurting my Father back soon." -MC

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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Reveal spoiler

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DARTH_INSANIS
DARTH_INSANISLv4

It started of ok but the more the story progressed the less I like the mc as he was just your typical egomaniac and arrogant villain which isn’t fun to read. Having to paragraphs about what just happened and reaffirming what the mc said about himself is true by having other characters confirm it got old real fast. Don’t get me started on the characters from anime and stuff come into this.

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DaoistElxnbZ
DaoistElxnbZLv1

Author, have you ever thought about making a FanFic about a Saiyan in DC............................................................................................................................................

6mth
robertibrown93x
robertibrown93xLv5

I love this fanfic. it's got quality writing ,and it has no grammar mistakes, or at the very least I haven't noticed any. It even has a MC that has its own (detailed) villain origin story written into the fanfic. If I had to pick out something I don't like about this fanfic it's that the author has added other comicbook universes and/or characters from said comicbook universes, as well as anime universes and there characters...now I don't crossovers, but I would expect the author to have created tags for all the different comicbook worlds/universes, and/or anime worlds/ universes; like for example the author currently has added a marvel comics character (black Widow), as well as a Dragonball/DBZ character (Son Goku), and both have their respective backstories ( I don't know if their back stories are exactly the same as their original universes backstories).But despite them being added to the fanfic; there are no tags to notify the readers.

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Mockingbird_2179
Mockingbird_2179Lv4

The main character is supposed to be a Mastermind, but constantly allows himself to be goaded Into traps for plot, this is ridiculous, so i'm dropping.

6mth
sean_8817
sean_8817Lv13

The way the story is told was good. The story has a good progression and a good character interaction, wherein the characters are able to interact with other characters without the interaction feeling like 2 people talking as if they are the same person. Overall, the story is well put, but I just hoped I read the tags, I didn't realize that he was the villain, I thought there would be a character development wherein he would become good. anyway, that was totally my bad. Man, I should really start reading tags.

7mth
REALMSINUS
REALMSINUSLv3

another dope start...I know its a commision but I hope you turn this to another Aden Strong.I love all your work..just asking though,will you feature young justice in a major way..cos i would love to see that..vamos.....

9mth
MimicReads
MimicReadsLv14

This is a great story! keep it up author

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