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robertibrown93xLv59mth
2024-06-09 21:49

I love this fanfic. it's got quality writing ,and it has no grammar mistakes, or at the very least I haven't noticed any. It even has a MC that has its own (detailed) villain origin story written into the fanfic. If I had to pick out something I don't like about this fanfic it's that the author has added other comicbook universes and/or characters from said comicbook universes, as well as anime universes and there characters...now I don't crossovers, but I would expect the author to have created tags for all the different comicbook worlds/universes, and/or anime worlds/ universes; like for example the author currently has added a marvel comics character (black Widow), as well as a Dragonball/DBZ character (Son Goku), and both have their respective backstories ( I don't know if their back stories are exactly the same as their original universes backstories).But despite them being added to the fanfic; there are no tags to notify the readers.

Son Of The Savage (a DC Comics SI)

Saintbarbido
4.3
65 Chs

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SaintbarbidoAuthor

I apologize for not including the tags

8mth
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robertibrown93xLv5

Ah, it's not something bad enough that you need to apologize for. I just have bad experiences from other fanfic writers that I feel do these kinda things on purpose. But I don't think you're one of them. All I can do is ask is that you take my review, as I intended so you can try and add the corresponding tags to this fanfic and/or your future fanfics.

Saintbarbido:I apologize for not including the tags
8mth
robertibrown93xLv5

Because you're a great writer. and I don't know if anyone has brought up similar issues yet but I figure it's better to get ahead of the curve and preempt any future negative comments, and/or reviews about it; by fixing it ahead time.

robertibrown93x:Ah, it's not something bad enough that you need to apologize for. I just have bad experiences from other fanfic writers that I feel do these kinda things on purpose. But I don't think you're one of them. All I can do is ask is that you take my review, as I intended so you can try and add the corresponding tags to this fanfic and/or your future fanfics.
8mth
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SaintbarbidoAuthor

Thanks for that. Usually criticism is never this polite.

robertibrown93x:Because you're a great writer. and I don't know if anyone has brought up similar issues yet but I figure it's better to get ahead of the curve and preempt any future negative comments, and/or reviews about it; by fixing it ahead time.
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It started of ok but the more the story progressed the less I like the mc as he was just your typical egomaniac and arrogant villain which isn’t fun to read. Having to paragraphs about what just happened and reaffirming what the mc said about himself is true by having other characters confirm it got old real fast. Don’t get me started on the characters from anime and stuff come into this.

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Author, have you ever thought about making a FanFic about a Saiyan in DC............................................................................................................................................

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The main character is supposed to be a Mastermind, but constantly allows himself to be goaded Into traps for plot, this is ridiculous, so i'm dropping.

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The way the story is told was good. The story has a good progression and a good character interaction, wherein the characters are able to interact with other characters without the interaction feeling like 2 people talking as if they are the same person. Overall, the story is well put, but I just hoped I read the tags, I didn't realize that he was the villain, I thought there would be a character development wherein he would become good. anyway, that was totally my bad. Man, I should really start reading tags.

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another dope start...I know its a commision but I hope you turn this to another Aden Strong.I love all your work..just asking though,will you feature young justice in a major way..cos i would love to see that..vamos.....

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