I had thought it would be kinda like Shadow Slave based off of the description author gave and set up the world in chapter one, but he thoroughly ruined it in the same chapter. The world is amazing and would be so interesting to see, if only the author wasn’t a complete dumba$@ and made it uninteresting with a system that’s focused on smut, not to mention also being a harem. Like seriously, I know people do fanfics because it’s what they want but Jesus Christ why make something so interesting only to ruin it? It’s so sad to see a potential great ff go down the drain…
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It has the harem and smut tags, what were you expecting? It's like giving a pizza place a bad review because you don't like pizza.
I was somewhat fine for the harem as long as it wasn’t too big, and smuts fine, but having a system designed for inappropriate shit is just unacceptable. It makes the story obsolete, like pineapple on pizza. I’m not gonna judge you if you’re into stuff like that, but I’m entitled to my own opinion and can share it.
literl010:It has the harem and smut tags, what were you expecting? It's like giving a pizza place a bad review because you don't like pizza.
RAAAHHHHH:I was somewhat fine for the harem as long as it wasn’t too big, and smuts fine, but having a system designed for inappropriate shit is just unacceptable. It makes the story obsolete, like pineapple on pizza. I’m not gonna judge you if you’re into stuff like that, but I’m entitled to my own opinion and can share it.
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You are free to give your opinion but it still doesn't take away how stupid you are for coming to criticize in the comments about something that was already known.
RAAAHHHHH:I was somewhat fine for the harem as long as it wasn’t too big, and smuts fine, but having a system designed for inappropriate shit is just unacceptable. It makes the story obsolete, like pineapple on pizza. I’m not gonna judge you if you’re into stuff like that, but I’m entitled to my own opinion and can share it.
I didn't know that.. So It's good that he warned me.. I don't like those type of systems as well..
Santy_Melay:You are free to give your opinion but it still doesn't take away how stupid you are for coming to criticize in the comments about something that was already known.
