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BlueMoon_IceCatLv38mth
2024-06-20 10:22

[Review from a reader at Chapter 10] There are a few things that i don't really like in the story so far. 1. The Chapter 1 of this story is uncomfortably similar to the first chapter of RSSG. The structure and the sequence. 2. So far (Chapter 10), the characters are 2D. I mean they sound so bland 3. The flow of the story is like a paper filled with holes. The thought process is always broken and made the story painfully bland to me. So far, that's the things i noticed in the story. Despite all of this, i will continue reading this hoping that the author will improve. I'll make another review once i reach Chapter 50. Sorry for this review, Author 😞

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IdczhenAuthor

Why be sorry when you’re giving a review from what you believed in? It’s not blatant hate or anything and I’m eager to see your expectations gradually changed

Drew_TappLv10

Hey, may I ask if you plan on continuing some of you dropped works?

Daoist9gavduLv13

if ur going continue any hiatus novel plzz continue primordial cultivator man i Read the novel from first till u stopped man plzz do give ending man

BlueMoon_IceCatLv3

Hiii sorryyy for the late reply. I saw your comments and my heart was filled with love because of your support. Say, what story do you want me to update?

Drew_Tapp:Hey, may I ask if you plan on continuing some of you dropped works?
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