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Idczhen14hReplied to Maximillionfixed the sentence structure.
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- Idczhen5dReplied to Idczhen
In case you haven’t noticed. I purposely made the first sentence confusing to read to demonstrate my astonishment at this paragraph.
"If you speak the truth…" Mikaru said with some hesitation, unsure if he believed the words, but he smiled and placed his hands on the young lord's shoulder, "Then I look forward to the day." - Idczhen5dCommented
?????? Now this makes completely no sense. Leon is a count and he’s someone with no status, but he can place his hand on the count’s shoulder despite meeting very briefly?????
"If you speak the truth…" Mikaru said with some hesitation, unsure if he believed the words, but he smiled and placed his hands on the young lord's shoulder, "Then I look forward to the day." - Idczhen5dReplied to LotusLin
Kekw, too naive I mean. What’s the point of swearing this to him when they just met? Would’ve been better to use actions instead of speaking empty words.
"I swear to you, on my honor as a Noble." Leon declared, slamming his fist against his chest as he glared intensely at him, "I will develop Othniel Levavot to become a place free from the discrimination against Parthrak and any other race." - Idczhen5dReplied to aoi_hoshi_cath88
I always appreciate these types of comment that spot my mistakes. But yeah, it's a shame that the paragraph comment would be deleted once any changes are made upon it.
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This paragraph has been deleted. - Idczhen6dReplied to LotusLinNever once had there been an incident of a system personally imposing a punishment on a player unless they were caught and detained by fellow NPCs.
- Idczhen7dReplied to Alex_5364
I understand your perspective, but what I'm trying to say here in this context is that Sandy is an NPC, meaning she's not a player nor someone he needs to be overly cautious about. This is especially true when it was implied multiple times that NPCs aren't human-like yet in the early stages. To put it this way, no one would be bothered with a "robotic NPC" and care how they looked to them.
"Ah, yes, what's the matter?" He snapped out of his daze and turned to her, raising his brows.