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LotusLinLv151yr
2024-04-03 11:59

Ai yo! This is a very interesting premise from the author la! We meet the main character at the worst time in his life. And truthfully, he was like, "Ai yaaaaaaaahhhhhh." But then, he suddenly found himself in an interesting situation la! I can't tell you what it is, but highly recommend that you read. Story is very interesting and author writes with compelling language. Great job la!

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Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

One of the most cringest reviews I read in my life. I don't understand what the above guy tried to say, but one thing is sure he want to act cute but failed miserably making it cringes in every possible angles. Especially the ‘la’ and ‘Aiya’ made it looks like moaning than style of speech. My heartfelt request is you act as your language than copying some hentai heroins.

Sour_corn
Sour_cornLv14

Maybe you should just mind your business and let the happy reader be

Daoist_itachi:One of the most cringest reviews I read in my life. I don't understand what the above guy tried to say, but one thing is sure he want to act cute but failed miserably making it cringes in every possible angles. Especially the ‘la’ and ‘Aiya’ made it looks like moaning than style of speech. My heartfelt request is you act as your language than copying some hentai heroins.
Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

Are you that sour corn? Want a rub?

Sour_corn:Maybe you should just mind your business and let the happy reader be
Little_North_Star
Little_North_StarLv14

Its not your business how the reader does her review, nobody asked for your opinion.

Daoist_itachi:One of the most cringest reviews I read in my life. I don't understand what the above guy tried to say, but one thing is sure he want to act cute but failed miserably making it cringes in every possible angles. Especially the ‘la’ and ‘Aiya’ made it looks like moaning than style of speech. My heartfelt request is you act as your language than copying some hentai heroins.
Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

Nobody asked for you to reply me, Little

Little_North_Star:Its not your business how the reader does her review, nobody asked for your opinion.
NightHeiress
NightHeiressLv1

Get a reality check "Aiya" and "La" are language interjections, not hentai sounds.

Daoist_itachi:One of the most cringest reviews I read in my life. I don't understand what the above guy tried to say, but one thing is sure he want to act cute but failed miserably making it cringes in every possible angles. Especially the ‘la’ and ‘Aiya’ made it looks like moaning than style of speech. My heartfelt request is you act as your language than copying some hentai heroins.
Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

I say Lotus_Lin come in your original acc, stop defending with Alts.Face to face like a man.

NightHeiress:Get a reality check "Aiya" and "La" are language interjections, not hentai sounds.
AnotidaMandemwa
AnotidaMandemwaLv3

Kid is butt hurt he can't produce a better story even if his 2 spit dribbling neurons git a phd in diversity. And boi go get your virgin butt laid cause your V card doesn't want you either. Stop watching hentai and read the book for a change... Oh wait... you probably cant't cause you get hard every time you read a normal sounding word!!! GET HELP!!!

Daoist_itachi:One of the most cringest reviews I read in my life. I don't understand what the above guy tried to say, but one thing is sure he want to act cute but failed miserably making it cringes in every possible angles. Especially the ‘la’ and ‘Aiya’ made it looks like moaning than style of speech. My heartfelt request is you act as your language than copying some hentai heroins.
AnotidaMandemwa
AnotidaMandemwaLv3

You messed with the wrong chicca. Mess with one of ours and these bees will come at you.

Daoist_itachi:I say Lotus_Lin come in your original acc, stop defending with Alts.Face to face like a man.
ExQuartz_Roachina
ExQuartz_RoachinaLv4

The fact that you are refusing to believe that we are real people and not alts says a lot about you. I wish you grow up from this phase XD

Daoist_itachi:I say Lotus_Lin come in your original acc, stop defending with Alts.Face to face like a man.
Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

Nigg^ah who asked your opinion? When did you escape from my basement?

AnotidaMandemwa:Kid is butt hurt he can't produce a better story even if his 2 spit dribbling neurons git a phd in diversity. And boi go get your virgin butt laid cause your V card doesn't want you either. Stop watching hentai and read the book for a change... Oh wait... you probably cant't cause you get hard every time you read a normal sounding word!!! GET HELP!!!
Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

It's hard to believe you all are real. Reason: All come to fight with me quickly after I pointed out that Lotus_fin

ExQuartz_Roachina:The fact that you are refusing to believe that we are real people and not alts says a lot about you. I wish you grow up from this phase XD
Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

No Lotus fin is a nigh^ah,

AnotidaMandemwa:You messed with the wrong chicca. Mess with one of ours and these bees will come at you.
ExQuartz_Roachina
ExQuartz_RoachinaLv4

Wow rude much? Even rac.ial sl'ur. No worries though! I'm Sure it'll never come back at you! :)

Daoist_itachi:No Lotus fin is a nigh^ah,
Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

You guys aren't real, behind the monitor i can see a face with full of freckles and nose liquid.

ExQuartz_Roachina:The fact that you are refusing to believe that we are real people and not alts says a lot about you. I wish you grow up from this phase XD
ExQuartz_Roachina
ExQuartz_RoachinaLv4

Some people are helpless like you and can never believe that other people have lives and friends. Projection is bad~

Daoist_itachi:You guys aren't real, behind the monitor i can see a face with full of freckles and nose liquid.
ExQuartz_Roachina
ExQuartz_RoachinaLv4

Some people are helpless like you and can never believe that other people have lives and friends. Projection is bad~

Daoist_itachi:You guys aren't real, behind the monitor i can see a face with full of freckles and nose liquid.
Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

It never come back at me because I am white. More superior bloodline than those of you, my dear Lotus fin

ExQuartz_Roachina:Wow rude much? Even rac.ial sl'ur. No worries though! I'm Sure it'll never come back at you! :)
Daoist_itachi
Daoist_itachiLv1

People will have friends, but not this brain dead people to fight me just 30 mins after my comment. That too with 5+ accounts

ExQuartz_Roachina:Some people are helpless like you and can never believe that other people have lives and friends. Projection is bad~
NispedanaSan
NispedanaSanLv13

You must not have had a real woman before if you think 'aiya' and 'la' are lewd.

Daoist_itachi:You guys aren't real, behind the monitor i can see a face with full of freckles and nose liquid.
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