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Help me remember the title of this novel please huhu: ALL I remember is that it's about the mc who transmigrated to another world. He encountered a monster right at the start, it's like a vampire something from a movie. He killed it and activated his golden finger. He can choose cards to get skills. The first skill he get is summoning a Sun Bear from a game. In his new world, people experience darkness or nightmares (i don't remember the term they used) and the MC realized that its movies and games. Its's similar to this story because he also visit other workds and the worlds are connected to movies and games. That's all I remember, please help me huhu
Hello sorry for this but I'm so desperate right now. please help me find a novel about this: ALL I remember is that it's about the mc who transmigrated to another world. He encountered a monster right at the start, it's like a vampire something from a movie. He killed it and activated his golden finger. He can choose cards to get skills. The first skill he get is summoning a Sun Bear from a game. In his new world, people experience darkness or nightmares (i don't remember the term they used) and the MC realized that its movies and games. It's similar to this story
Hello! Just wanna leave my thoughts here for everyone to read, especially the author. First of all, I want to say that it is a very very good novel and is a well written one. I genuinely enjoyed it and read through all the chapters available in 2 days. However, there are some issues that I want to address and some recommendations that maybe you, the author can consider. 1. The world background is very vague. I don't know much about the world and it's bothering me. Aside from the few descriptions in the early chapters, there's no more information left that can help us imagine the world Silvanus is in. I highly suggest that you make an outline of the world, how it progresses from shocked with the dungeons to a now functioning civilization once again. Plus, I really hope you define more the part about their ranks. I remember Cocona said that Leonard is ranked S-Rank. It may be a common trope but it can help define the world more. 2. Character Design. Aside from Silvanus, I don't feel any connection with anyone, maybe aside from Leonard and Drake. The characters that they are with in the dungeons sounds so plain and don't have any personality. I highly suggest that you take time introducing them to us. Build their personality. Make them connect to us. It helps in the immersion and the quality of the story. No matter how irrelevant the character is, they should make us think about them even for a second more because that means, you make an impact. 3. Skills. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE EXPLAIN THE CHARACTERS' SKILL TO US!!! It sounds so bland every time I read it. Drake has sword and dragon something powers, Cocona has thunder powers, Lucifer believers has fire powers. That's it. It sounds so bland and boring. You implemented a System that gives them notifications, use that trope. Make an attribute panel. Explain their abilities. Make them unique. Don't just say that this character has healing powers, don't just say that this believer has light powers. NAME THEM! Because if it were to happen in real life, we would name them for real. AND STICK TO THE POWER YOU GAVE TO THE CHARACTER. Drakes' power is dragon something transformation and the giant sword and the suddenly in the later later chapters, you said that he has fire powers. When it was in his POV, you never said anything about him having fire powers. STICK TO WHAT YOU WROTE PLEASE. 4. Make your characters smarter. I'm not just talking about characters who enters the dungeon but also NPCs. PEOPLE ARE NOT THAT DUMB! You said that they already know about the dungeons, I mean not the new dungeons that need solving, but the old dungeons. It's impossible that they don't have any experience. Every single time, they panicked so much, held others down then got killed. Make them smarter and more interesting pls. 5. Dungeons. Problem solving dungeons is a very good concept. It's very similar to horror instances from a type of genre INFINITE FLOW. I highly suggest that you read more of them because the plot of the dungeons are so bland and so stupid. Plus YOU DON'T ALWAYS NEED BAD AND STUPID PEOPLE TO GIVE DANGER TO THE MAIN CHARACTERS!!!!!!!!! It's okay for the first time but you keep on doing it and it's making me mad. Please READ MORE INFINITE FLOW NOVEL and watch how they unfold the plot of horror instances. You said that the new dungeons can't be fought head on because you need to solve puzzles but the characters keep on heading straight to danger. It's like they don't have any survival instincts. They fought with their lives at stake even before the new dungeons, make that make sense pls. Anyways, that's all. Please take this review with a grain of salt. I just want to express what I think and suggest ideas that can make this story better. I will continue reading and I hope you take ideas from my review. Have a good day! Blue Moon, out!
Several things to take note of before reading this: 1. MC is so plain. It's like he doesn't have his own personality at all. Very jarring to be honest. 2. System is so random. It's like something you put randomly to make the story have something unique. Also, the fact that the MC just immediately accepted the random system and go on his life immediately doesn't sit right with me. He doesn't even get flustered or anything like that. 3. "CHINA IS THE GREATEST propaganda and super sexist. If you're misogynistic, you can go ahead and enjoy this novel. Thats's all
Hello! I really want to read this story but i completely forgot its name. If there's a person with a kind heart out there, please help this poor soul. The premise is that the MC came from earth into the new world. The new world is full of rifts or dungeons where monsters emerge. The first day MC arrived, he already encountered a monster (a vampire like monster from a story, i think it has a long tounge) and barely used his wits to kill it. In return, he awakens his powers. Cards appeared and he was given the choice to choose his skills. In his shock, the skills written on the cards are similar (some of them are even completely the same) to the games he played back on earth. The dungeons or rifts in this world are the movies here on earth. Like in later chapters, he encountered Freddy Krueger and killed him, obtaining a book connected to hell or something. Please help me, that's all i know
HELLOOOOO!!! I'M TRYING TO FIND THAT PARTICULAR NOVELL!!! CAN YOU TELL ME THE NAME???? PLEASEEEE
Hiii sorryyy for the late reply. I saw your comments and my heart was filled with love because of your support. Say, what story do you want me to update?
[Review from a reader at Chapter 10] There are a few things that i don't really like in the story so far. 1. The Chapter 1 of this story is uncomfortably similar to the first chapter of RSSG. The structure and the sequence. 2. So far (Chapter 10), the characters are 2D. I mean they sound so bland 3. The flow of the story is like a paper filled with holes. The thought process is always broken and made the story painfully bland to me. So far, that's the things i noticed in the story. Despite all of this, i will continue reading this hoping that the author will improve. I'll make another review once i reach Chapter 50. Sorry for this review, Author 😞
Just finished with Chapter 9 yesterday and I'm currently working on the Chapter 10. I'll post them at the same time :)
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