Even though the story is interesting, I just can't understand why people give it such high ratings. at best it's worth a 3/5. This is a typical isekai story with the system and MC overpowered. Narration: The story operates on a simple principle: Kaido goes somewhere, defeats all enemies easily, destroys the surrounding area. There are no interesting dialogues, the characters are all bland, I understand that this is fan fiction and there is no need to retell the backstory of the characters from the very beginning, but they are not even given the appropriate timing, the characters are only needed to show how they fear Kaido, or how much they respect him, nothing more. Plot: The story actually ceases to make sense immediately after the MC receives the first reward from the system, since he was already the strongest character in the story, but he became even stronger and already at the beginning of the 20th chapters he can go and destroy the World, just flying and burning everything with your breath. MS: Not interesting, he has no personal philosophy, all he does is carry out the missions of the system. He doesn't explore the world of ONE PIECE, doesn't try to find treasure, doesn't build his own kingdom, with his own views and preferences, he just does what Kaido would do in the original story with changes in the storyline. The description of the battles is quite interesting and the author conveys the atmosphere of what is happening well, but the battles themselves are not interesting, because the MC is invincible.

The story is missing some *spice*, you know.. It's preatty bland - no humor, steriotipical characters, no butterfly effect, mc thinks he IS Kaido personality wise, 1 hit 1 kill fights. This story is missing a hook that keeps the readers reading. For me tge more I read the harder it was to read the next chapter because nothing interesting happened. Everything is predictable, so there weren't a lot of surprises. Now the system - the system makes the story worse, because the main point of this fanfic was "what would you do if you were Kaido?", obviously the answer wouldn't be you would cheat with a system, right? That defeats the whole purpose of this fanfic idea wise.

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nice story author you deserve 5 stars ,

great fanfiction until the auction, from then on it's unnecessarily long chapters, and kaido makes unnecessary plans since he's so powerful, it's clearly forced to lengthen the story. as we know that the translator has a patreon... move on if you don't want to be disappointed

too long for nothing, more 20 chapters to kill Luffy, and the end... just the author who takes us for ideas with a supposedly intelligent MC with complicated plans. kaido new is stronger and invincible, what's the point of making plans, he's in front of you, you kill him now and that's it

best one piece fan fic have ever read. The level of detail that went into connecting planning is amazing.

thanks

Good translation, good story.