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2024-06-17 19:50

Even though the story is interesting, I just can't understand why people give it such high ratings. at best it's worth a 3/5. This is a typical isekai story with the system and MC overpowered. Narration: The story operates on a simple principle: Kaido goes somewhere, defeats all enemies easily, destroys the surrounding area. There are no interesting dialogues, the characters are all bland, I understand that this is fan fiction and there is no need to retell the backstory of the characters from the very beginning, but they are not even given the appropriate timing, the characters are only needed to show how they fear Kaido, or how much they respect him, nothing more. Plot: The story actually ceases to make sense immediately after the MC receives the first reward from the system, since he was already the strongest character in the story, but he became even stronger and already at the beginning of the 20th chapters he can go and destroy the World, just flying and burning everything with your breath. MS: Not interesting, he has no personal philosophy, all he does is carry out the missions of the system. He doesn't explore the world of ONE PIECE, doesn't try to find treasure, doesn't build his own kingdom, with his own views and preferences, he just does what Kaido would do in the original story with changes in the storyline. The description of the battles is quite interesting and the author conveys the atmosphere of what is happening well, but the battles themselves are not interesting, because the MC is invincible.

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Mad_World04
Mad_World04Lv4

That sounds like a 2 out of 5 than a 3 to be honest. Damn near a 1.

Moveton
MovetonLv3

that's right, if I only rated the plot and characters it would be 1, but webnovel's rating system is broad, so my rating was higher than 3.

Mad_World04:That sounds like a 2 out of 5 than a 3 to be honest. Damn near a 1.
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