Rhandson_D

mya stone was born 280, Robbert is 20 during the war 282 but mya stone is 15~16? i mean wth? if you want to write about the rebellion at least make use of the... brain...

anything to fill a page

is this AI writen or AI assisted?, theres so much filler!

dry enough to write more about hammering that word count...

this fanfic has really bad story development author made mc make an enemy of everyone just so he could rant about original characters, the whole thing is an endless rant and freebie cheats falling to mc hands, this is nothing new but.... theres nothing else... kinda boring chew fanfic, many chapters that are flavor bland

the dummy made everyone with some strengh his enemy then talk like this

did this stupid guy just give mass to a fast speeding energy construct so he could then catch it...omg this guy is not a modern earth human