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Someone_Or_OtherLv152mth
2024-11-23 18:58

The entire novel is cliche. It’s basically paint by numbers, to the point that there’s absolutely no entertainment in reading it if you’ve ever read an “immortal is reborn on earth” novel. The FL starts out particularly obnoxious. She had a one night stand with the MC, then disappeared off to America and completely ditched him for five years. Then she has the audacity to blame him for not being a father to their daughter. Seriously, the hell is wrong with authors who write that garbage? On top of that, the sheer number of misunderstandings caused by the MC’s absolute refusal to ever say anything at all (because the five directions heavenly emperor never explains himself) makes for extremely forced plots and pointless drama. Then there’s a bunch of dropped plot threads holding everything together in one big tangled skein of yarn. Overall, don’t waste coins on this garbage. There are much better novels in the same vein that have actually been completed, not just hastily wrapped up because the author got bored.

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