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Dread_Rabbits
Dread_RabbitsLv152mth
2024-10-21 23:34

Ok read the whole thing. Pretty good the early premis was quite fun, the story stayed mostly stable till close to the end even with the rank inflation that always shows up n these stories. The author did “finish” the book but considering all the loose ends it’s more like wrote a ending to the book. Techincally. Guess it could be set for a sequel, but unless that happens I had to take a star off of the story for the unsatisfying way it ended. Not much better than a “ well we are out of time so let’s end this with a he crushed he big boss and they lived happily ever after the end.” And no that’s not the actual ending…. Though it is close.

Urban Most Awesome Dad

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Dread_Rabbits
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Ok I want to clarify. I am greatful the author did close the book. It was a hurried end but it was an end. So many completed books are just left hanging stops suddenly with no closure. This author at least tried to give some stopping point for his book even if it felt rushed

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