Item: Danmachi-Hell's forge
Rating: 2
Author: NeaCambelt

NeaCambeltLv19mth

2024-05-06 02:41

Pk lui retirer ses souvenir ? Si c pas parce que tu sais pas écrire une histoire sans souhait la je sais pas [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Danmachi-Hell's forge

loskro

4.5

155 Chs

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The_man_The_mythLv4

You can delete author this is just a bot

9mth

NeaCambeltLv1

Non [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=update]

The_man_The_myth:You can delete author this is just a bot

9mth

Ero_no_KamiLv4

What did he said? i don't understand his language so...

The_man_The_myth:You can delete author this is just a bot

9mth

GodOfLightLv1

He said why take away his memories

Ero_no_Kami:What did he said? i don't understand his language so...

9mth

Listless_GrimLv4

NeaCambelt:Non [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=update]

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SleepySmileLv14

Pk lui retirer ses souvenir ? Si c pas parce que tu sais pas écrire une histoire sans souhait la je sais pas = Why remove his memories ? if it's because you don't know how to write a story withouth wish idk

Ero_no_Kami:What did he said? i don't understand his language so...

7mth

SleepySmileLv14

t juste débile c dans le synopsis vien pas pleurer ici si ta pas lu le synopsis

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NeaCambeltLv1

Lol c toi l'abruti tu sais pas lire ou quoi je lui demande pourquoi il lui a retiré justement bouffon Retourne apprendre à lire [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

SleepySmile:t juste débile c dans le synopsis vien pas pleurer ici si ta pas lu le synopsis

7mth

SleepySmileLv14

parce que c'est le but de l'histoire voir comment il vivrait sans ses souvenir bouffon, tu va pas aller voir l'auteur d'un livre fantastique et lui demander pourquoi il fait pas de la romance

NeaCambelt:Lol c toi l'abruti tu sais pas lire ou quoi je lui demande pourquoi il lui a retiré justement bouffon Retourne apprendre à lire [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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NeaCambeltLv1

Mais tu es vraiment débile c incroyable [img=recommend] La raison pour laquelle je pose la question est évident tu es juste trop stupide pour comprendre

SleepySmile:parce que c'est le but de l'histoire voir comment il vivrait sans ses souvenir bouffon, tu va pas aller voir l'auteur d'un livre fantastique et lui demander pourquoi il fait pas de la romance

7mth

NeaCambeltLv1

A ton avis pk l'auteur enleve les souvenir au mc ? Pour voir comment il se débrouille sans non c pas ça du tout

SleepySmile:parce que c'est le but de l'histoire voir comment il vivrait sans ses souvenir bouffon, tu va pas aller voir l'auteur d'un livre fantastique et lui demander pourquoi il fait pas de la romance

7mth

SleepySmileLv14

de tte façon j'ai regarder ton profil tu met que des 1* donc bon j'ai vite compris que ta des problème dans ta vie que t juste une sous mrd qui vien juste se plaindre de tout ici vu qu'il ne sait rien faire dans le monde réel

NeaCambelt: A ton avis pk l'auteur enleve les souvenir au mc ? Pour voir comment il se débrouille sans non c pas ça du tout

7mth

NeaCambeltLv1

Ouuuaaaaah regarde toi tu sais pas quoi dire alors tout de suite ça change de sujet hein ? C'est un truc que vous avez tous en commun les types comme toi qui viennent me casser les couilles pour rien, tu vois après les avoir remis à leur places comme je vien de le faire avec toi vous commencez à plus savoir quoi dire alors vous changer de sujet et parlé de mes notes qui d'ailleurs au passage sont plus des 2 étoiles et il y a des cinqs étoiles 🌟 ouaah encore une fois tu es remis à ta place autrement dis dans les égouts avec ta famille les RATS 🐀 [img=recommend]

SleepySmile:de tte façon j'ai regarder ton profil tu met que des 1* donc bon j'ai vite compris que ta des problème dans ta vie que t juste une sous mrd qui vien juste se plaindre de tout ici vu qu'il ne sait rien faire dans le monde réel

7mth

SleepySmileLv14

ouaaa bravo ta appris a insulter ma famille et si tu regarde bien ta mis genre 1 5* sur une vingtaine de note et ton "je t'ai remis a ta place " tu te le met la ou je pense je te dis juste d'arrêté de critiquer les auteur tout ce que tu va faire c leur faire drop leur novel

NeaCambelt:Ouuuaaaaah regarde toi tu sais pas quoi dire alors tout de suite ça change de sujet hein ? C'est un truc que vous avez tous en commun les types comme toi qui viennent me casser les couilles pour rien, tu vois après les avoir remis à leur places comme je vien de le faire avec toi vous commencez à plus savoir quoi dire alors vous changer de sujet et parlé de mes notes qui d'ailleurs au passage sont plus des 2 étoiles et il y a des cinqs étoiles 🌟 ouaah encore une fois tu es remis à ta place autrement dis dans les égouts avec ta famille les RATS 🐀 [img=recommend]

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MapleHinataSyrupLv1

I know right why take memories away and shet he got wishes cuz he got no memory of that world like bruh bruh

7mth

Gabichu_YeahLv3

Listless_Grim:
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Fallen_Angel2998Lv14

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