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1emanresU
1emanresULv18mth
2024-06-03 00:08

I read up to chapter 39 but now I'm dropping it, most of the chapters are taken up by the MC thinking or the author expositing how the skills and powers sytsems work and it's gotten really boring. There's also the constant conveniences that the author keeps handing the MC like him being the first person to have the idea of deodorant, or some random guy he met once getting his God to set up a meeting with Hephaestus for the MC. At this point what little momentum the story had is dead and I don't see it getting any better.

Danmachi-Hell's forge

loskro
4.5
156 Chs

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fret_her
fret_herLv14

I had to drop it for those same reasons. It’s almost like I’m reading about someone telling there life story than an actual story. The author also does a lot of telling and not showing. “I broke something so hestia screamed at me”, “I did this and then this happened”. I see this is a constant problem throughout the whole book.

6mth
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Tenebris_Necros
Tenebris_NecrosLv4

Thanks for warning.

5mth
3
daydreamer_no1
daydreamer_no1Lv14

ikr I was about to read this lucky I saw this

Tenebris_Necros:Thanks for warning.
4mth
2
AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv1

Gracias por salvarme

3mth
2
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Aayush_storms
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This has potential to be the best danmachi fic. So far story has been really great and I hope you won't drop this ff. (HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TO THOSE WHO ARE READING THE REVIEW FIRST)

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1emanresU
1emanresULv1

I think this story has a lot of potential, the writing quality is shockingly good for something you'd find on Webnovel, we get 1 decently long chapter a day, the story's moving in a decent direction at a steady pace and the characters are good. MC is likeable and relatable and the legacy characters are mostly accurate apart from some intentional changes. My only problem with this fic (which isn't a massive one) is that the author decided to apply our mythology to the Danmachi Gods (making them related by blood e.g Miach is Dian Chedt's son) and decided that they can have children so long as they are in Tenkai which removes the God's motivation to descend to the mortal world to start families (familias) but other than that, it's pretty good.

9mth
NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv1

Pk lui retirer ses souvenir ? Si c pas parce que tu sais pas écrire une histoire sans souhait la je sais pas [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Rak
RakLv5

At first i thought the author is an edgy teen with all the cursed energy BS, but then slowly the world opened up and the MC started to think and utilize his energy(mana replacement), everything in the story makes sense. the MC makes sense, his actions makes sense, he is growing at a pace which makes sense. currently he is level 2 and i cant wait to watch him grow to top.

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Aetherrr
AetherrrLv4

Very interesting story and I like the MC and his interactions with other characters. Keep it up 🗿👍🔥

8mth
The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

If it’s made by this author then it’s good

9mth
Trextidactle
TrextidactleLv1

I was thinking with how the mc is and the way his ability works you can make it so Alfia is still alive and have him save her and have her reset her falna to have her become a god with him and because of her personality I think her and the Mac would mesh well.

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Crashman2005
Crashman2005Lv5

Just knowing the author i know it will be fantastic fanfic

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Cortick
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Looking forward to more chapter's which I'm sure there will be plenty of if your other work's are anything to go by, keep up the great work.

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