Item: Soccer: I have the attributes of Messi in his Prime
Rating: 4.4
Author: Marcus_2007

Marcus_2007Lv34mth

2024-10-27 00:07

1)Writing Quality: The presentation is a bit lacking and wrong names occasionally. It can be improved in my opinion. 2)Stability: I am not aware of it but seeing there are 400+ chaps I gave a 4/5. 3)Story Development: It's purrrfect. 4)Character design: Mc is written well but there are discrepancies in other players' character 5)World Background; I am living in a good world q(≧▽≦q)

Soccer: I have the attributes of Messi in his Prime

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