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Vlognation0509
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2024-05-21 15:05

Everything is good but why do commentators have Chinese name?

Soccer: I have the attributes of Messi in his Prime

Johanssen10
4.6
557 Chs

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Johanssen10
Johanssen10Author

It's a Chinese novel, and I understand that they are famous in China.

8mth
ILHREXYI291101
ILHREXYI291101Lv4

I just imagine it as multiple commentators for different languages for viewers at home

Johanssen10:It's a Chinese novel, and I understand that they are famous in China.
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Uzumaki_Kushina_21
Uzumaki_Kushina_21Lv5

why don't just change the name of mc if you're translating this novel if you don't change then what's the difference between yours and original translation on google

Johanssen10:It's a Chinese novel, and I understand that they are famous in China.
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Sasuke_Uchia_9985
Sasuke_Uchia_9985Lv4

there are naturaly chinise commentators and fan reactions in a novel about chinise messi

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GrandMaster_69
GrandMaster_69Lv13

Does this novel include Chinese themes like "your Courting death" or like those face slapping type???? if so then I don't want to read it....

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EVILBOWDENS
EVILBOWDENSLv4

More romance and more about the system.. But definitely more romantic scenes with more details.

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Eduard_Palas
Eduard_PalasLv14

My problem with this novel is that it keeps changing the players names(e.g. Reus was Royce for a chapter, De Bruyne has a different name every chapter,Lahm is Ram at some point). Other than that it's a good sports novel

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Frank10
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"More chapters, teacher, it's great! There aren't many soccer novels on web novels, so I'd like more novels like this!!!!"[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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AmSincere
AmSincereLv4

This is Good. Keep going, You should probably move it to a different section in order to gain more traction and attention, maybe spend more time editing as well.

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Raja_Sihir
Raja_SihirLv1

There are many errors such as mixed up chapters and missing words and cut chapters so the writing quality is low.[img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why]

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BrandPatriarch
BrandPatriarchLv11

Poor Neymar, if only he had a system to stope injuryㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

el fic está bien, la traducción es basura , parece que lo tradujeron con Google y no corrigieron nada

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vincent_ogunsola
vincent_ogunsolaLv4

Arthur you are doing a great job but I wanna ask if it's possible for you to write a fanfic about ronaldo or R9 it will be greatly appreciated

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