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  • 12 days ago
    Posted

    Remove those asterisks ... They seem out of place... It is fun,fine............................................................................................

  • 12 days ago
    Replied to GeNiuS_FoX000

    Why ????

  • 13 days ago
    Replied to Mr_Raiden

    Pirated so I can read all the other chaps at once 😂😂.. instead of 1 or 2 day depending on fast passes ...😭😭😭

  • 13 days ago
    Posted

    Oh boy!!This one is going to be super long... Let's Disscuss him the mc: He is human (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) and this is a very important thing to be.. I read a lot of books where a reincarnated guy has one emotion in excess and fuck the rest like arrogance or fear or Harem obsession... Our guy is human... He is in Leauge 2 now... It was leauge 5 but author changed it. I like his thinking .. his opinions about his team, he trusts his system but trusts himself more...He doesn't always follow the plans system lays out for him.. Super Green flag in my opinion..💚 Otherwise It would just be system as the coach.. His family situation was like super awkward when introduced... 😭😭 A lot of guys asked for his life outside the game and author just dropped a pregnant wife and son💀💀.. Like Bro wtf.. Even the MC was stupefied.. Author salvaged the situation by saying the previous guy was super focused on his career and uncaring of his family. so much so he wanted his wife to get aborted😶😶Fuck him....(We are not given any info of how the guy before was. But I hope author does say more about that in upcoming chaps) Our mc is a great family man🥰🥰 and tries to good of his family I still feel weirded out by the fact that our man has to be husband of an woman whom he didn't know and father of a boy whom he didn't raise and his wife is pregnant.. I pray for you. Amen🙏 His previous is completely unsaid and I would love to know more(I haven't read full and I'm broke) I hope author done that.. Now let's disscuss the system: It is odd to say the least... I want to say super Op but our guy isn't ferguson or zidane ... so he can't make it that effective.. If the same system was used between top premier league teams .. bro others won't stand a chance.. It is non sentient system... again a plus point➕➕➕ It is also non-restrictive as of now atleast.. I think it won't have any penalty tasks in the future as well.. It has many functions and I personally like it... As I said I'm broke .. so I hope this novel becomes famous so Someone pirates it and I get to read it😂😂 .. I am sorry for this author.. But I will give you 15 stars for this .... +5stars Let's goo!!! Let's goo!!! Let's goo!!! Let's goo!!! Let's goo!!! Let's goo!!! Let's goo!!! Let's goo!!!

  • 16 days ago
    Commented

    To be honest, government laws in india support those of lower classes too much compared to the higher ones like for votes and caste system is not as simple as the author shows it...... There are tooooo many things to consider... Even place of birth can affect your social standing and that is not saying a village man and city man .. it is more complicated

  • 21 days ago
    Posted

    It is fun 😊👍..........................,..................................................,...................... Don't bother with negative comments... Most didn't even read 😞....................................................................................................................... ...... ....

  • 24 days ago
    Posted

    It's back........................................................................................................................................................................ It's good.... READ IT!!!!!

  • a month ago
    Posted

    I love the story man... I love the system presentation more .... a lot more... it looks so good.. I feel like I am seeing it instead of other novels where we can only understand what main character is seeing but we can't see it.. if you know what i mean Also I think you should give some rating changes to final products and spell reason why the rating changed like direction is a master class or actors are s grade something like that which made the movie a grade even though script is c or b It is good

  • 2 months ago
    Posted

    I won't recommend this. I really thought this was a MTL but the author said it isn't. I really hope , he uses some AI tool to make it better at least. Good Idea but HORRENDOUS execution.

  • 2 months ago
    Replied to Binded_Ginger

    After that last line I didn't know if felt like puking or I had a laugh coming