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Invincible
InvincibleLv137mth
2024-09-08 21:14

I have read till 160 chapters. I enjoyed first 100 chapters, but later 10 chapter was too much. How to say, translation quality dropped sharply. And i begun to skip at least half of the chapter. Names of some clubs are Chinesed, for example Yun Da Bremen, originally its Werder Bremen. There are more mistakes there, i can't list them all. Story is good. Development is too not bad, characters and world good too. But translation... Its redacted MTL. Better than MTL, but should have been better. Good story per se, if there were good translation would have readed all of the chapters at the time i took to read these 160 chapters.

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