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ShikiLv137mth
2024-08-01 21:56

Too much forced plot and repeatings, plus author appearently doesn't care about what he wrote a few chapters prior and constantly changes things like how at the beginning he says the mc is born a few days after his sister but 10 chap later it turns to weeks after, and this is not the only time something like this happens. All these things just breaks the flow of the story causing readers to quit.

Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

WinterDragon_1
4.5
284 Chs

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TypeshitnakjdaLv2

would you like to read my novel ?

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WinterDragon_1Author

5 stars because it is. Different from typical settings.

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James_ChronosLv1

Author, please update faster! This novel is so good. Was getting sick of cultivation novels with pathetic brainless mc. Finally a novel where MC has a good brain and the system is also 10X reward system! Upload faster and I'll give you more coins.

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TheUrbanKingLv13

honestly the book is good, but the author lacks the ability to convey. He overexplains, repeats, drags a scene for far too long, destroys the charcters personality he built by making them say and do dumb stuff…there’s so much I can talk about. Author a message to you. Idk if it’s ur greed to pump out more chapters, but ur quality has drastically fallen after starting premium. This is how you lose fans. It’s honestly disappointing.

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Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] This novel is about an MC who reincarnated into a novel world and was born in one of the most powerful families in the world.. But MC can be considered as a trash by his family due to lack of mana affinity. Hence, he was unable to become an exorcist, whose purpose was to fight against the demon.. Actually, he got his golden finger "the binding system" since he was born but unable to use it due to the way the families treat him.. He has been locked in the room and unable to meet anyone except guard, teacher, and maid.. MC, as someone who has knowledge about this novel world, the future event, and important character who plays an important role, he tries to use a binding system with his twin sister.. This novel is not like wuxia or xianxia, it give a different feeling.. It kinda nice that I found this novel.. Except for the fact that I found it too earlier.. It just has 33 chapters for now.. I feel it is not enough.. I need more.. Also, I hope there is no love between siblings.. The 10 times reward is also good.. Some novels have some things like 10,000 fold system or 1 million times rewards, but even after 10,000 fold rewards, the item/treasure just improved slightly, like one rank higher only.. But this novel is different.. The 10 times reward is really give a huge improvement, like it has evolved the treasure/pill for 10 times.. I hope it stays like this and not weakening the effect..

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PancakesWitchLv13

Fairly common tropes mash well together with unique world backgrounds, or well, not so common ones. The author does a good job at baiting readers with the usual tropes and then actually offers them an actual, proper story with some soul to it, well done

11mth
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GorlowwLv14

While I believe this story has a lot of potential, author needs to stop repeating sentences and delaying the story. Also, please stop explaining every single detail about how everyone is going to behave if something "would" happen and instead just show us things actually happening. example: how the elders would behave if the MC killed a main branch character, like bro, we get it without you saying the hypothetical scenario, so stop delaying the story and get on with it.

9mth
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WhOaMILv14

The premise of the story is very good but the progress of the plot is very slow so that makes the story very boring to read and there are too many cliffhangers in this book (I mean almost every chapter in this book ends up with a cliffhanger)

10mth
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BeyondTheLawLv11

Only 17 chapters, but I enjoyed every single one of them. This is a five star and I can easily see this novel going big. Worth!!!

11mth
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Dragon_empererLv14

good story with a lot of filler chapters.most of the chapters are with repeating content with different wordings to increase word count. Author Hope you think about the readers who are paying for your work as well ..

7mth
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ThorleifLv15

I don’t know… I just think it’s boring. The premise sounded really interesting, but the execution is meh. Too many moments where the mc just acts stupid in my opinion. 10x reward power seems really op, but in the end it’s just not implemented well. Also I personally just don’t like the mc that much, he doesn’t really resonate with me. I can see why many might enjoy this novel, it’s just not for me. Slow progression, (imo) boring mc and the badly implemented 10x reward power - I really have to push myself to continue reading the chapters. The novel is just not for me.

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