honestly the book is good, but the author lacks the ability to convey. He overexplains, repeats, drags a scene for far too long, destroys the charcters personality he built by making them say and do dumb stuff…there’s so much I can talk about. Author a message to you. Idk if it’s ur greed to pump out more chapters, but ur quality has drastically fallen after starting premium. This is how you lose fans. It’s honestly disappointing.
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LIKEPlease try out my first work as an Author : Supreme Warlock: New Order in the Apocalypse. Genre: Romance, System, Tragedy, Dark, Evolution It is free to read as I am yet to apply for contract. The thing is that I have only started 3 days ago but I have uploaded my first 21 chapters and I am waiting for responses from vet readers like you to get their critics and thoughts. Thank you and please give it a chance