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Ryan_Av
Ryan_AvLv16mth
2024-06-22 03:48

Overall the story is good except for the fact that the author made the age of the characters be 6 years old. If you Google it, most children learn to read at 6. However, for some reason, the author made these 6 years old able to hunt demons, have complex emotions and thoughts, a 6 year old girl went down the mountain by herself, tried solving her clans financial problems, and these 6 years old children are building muscles that are strong enough to wield swords and slice people in half which is ridiculous. The protagonist is also plotting revenge against 6 year old kids which is so petty. Imagine an adult trying to get revenge on children which is ridiculous.

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Riler3
Riler3Lv3

I know right, the plot is immersive but the concept just doesn't sit right with me.

SageRivers
SageRiversLv3

It’s not Earth buddy

Lecteur_omniscient
Lecteur_omniscientLv1

Moi aussi j'ai détesté cette partie

Lone_Reader
Lone_ReaderLv1

its called fantasy for a reason lol

PhoenixYT
PhoenixYTLv3

shit review, if you google no human can even use magic. A novel is fictional book my guy

SlATVH
SlATVHLv2

Who said they can’t [img=proud]

PhoenixYT:shit review, if you google no human can even use magic. A novel is fictional book my guy
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