100 chapters in and honestly.. i feel like pulling my hair out. The novel is decent, but the MC is completely incompetent. Has no wit, no intelligence, or caution. Always getting caught in obvious schemes, always being helped and saved by others. There is also too much AI processing going on to be able to enjoy the story properly. Also, tropes keep repeating, villains get recycled, as in 100 chaps, only 1 or 2 died.. rest are kicking as they always escape. MC is utterly pathetic and incompetent, always getting kidnapped, or tricked, or manipulated, truly nothing you would expect from a lawyer. The only glimmer of intelligence he showed was in the first 2 chaps. After that, he shows no growth, never learns from his mistakes and always gets schemed against by others. Tropes get repetitive after a while, with similar situations happening from which MC never learns. I lost my patience. Tried my best.
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You pretty much nailed it on the head with this review. And this author is the type to reply to comments with lies in order to get people to continue reading.....
Yeah, i noticed. Keeps saying the good parts will come, but from chap 30 to 100 there wasn't a single good one. Just boring overall, with an incompetent MC with unbeatable enemies, who is incapable of thinking.. Goes to show the level of creativity and inteligence the author has.. not even AI can make it better lol
sleepygood:You pretty much nailed it on the head with this review. And this author is the type to reply to comments with lies in order to get people to continue reading.....
yeah, it shouldn't take 100+ chapters for "the good ones," especially when 70+ chapters of them are locked...
B0mbaCl0ck:Yeah, i noticed. Keeps saying the good parts will come, but from chap 30 to 100 there wasn't a single good one. Just boring overall, with an incompetent MC with unbeatable enemies, who is incapable of thinking.. Goes to show the level of creativity and inteligence the author has.. not even AI can make it better lol
Problem is, it doesn't get good at all. I read the titles from 100 onwards, and they all point to catastrophe from one to next. MC goes from bad to worse. Then there's the girls. Only one is V, with one of the 2 main wives being some ex coven hoe, who was also involved in the 0rgies with another coven. While i was never a puritan, she is a big hoe for a main wife...Not too old but too washed up.
sleepygood:yeah, it shouldn't take 100+ chapters for "the good ones," especially when 70+ chapters of them are locked...
Yeah i dropped after the first lemon, author and the story don't give the right vibes. If a hoe has been in orgies then you have no hope of actually satisfying them. I'm not a puritan either, but being in orgies is to much lol
B0mbaCl0ck:Problem is, it doesn't get good at all. I read the titles from 100 onwards, and they all point to catastrophe from one to next. MC goes from bad to worse. Then there's the girls. Only one is V, with one of the 2 main wives being some ex coven hoe, who was also involved in the 0rgies with another coven. While i was never a puritan, she is a big hoe for a main wife...Not too old but too washed up.
Yep. Those covens are basically harems. and the coven she was part of was basically of MC's enemy who was swapping women with his other enemy. So one of MC's wives, got banged by 2 of his enemies repeatedly, and who knows who else before or during that.
sleepygood:Yeah i dropped after the first lemon, author and the story don't give the right vibes. If a hoe has been in orgies then you have no hope of actually satisfying them. I'm not a puritan either, but being in orgies is to much lol
wow.... idk what to say to that, but wow.... I'd have thrown her back into the streets. I'm glad I dropped it where I did
B0mbaCl0ck:Yep. Those covens are basically harems. and the coven she was part of was basically of MC's enemy who was swapping women with his other enemy. So one of MC's wives, got banged by 2 of his enemies repeatedly, and who knows who else before or during that.
Well, many things aren't mentioned, but they're implied easily enough that they're obvious. But yeah.. one of MC's wives is a dirty hoe.. used like a rag by others, and acting as if she's some queen with MC. There are many nasty events in that novel anyways, even if you can ignore the heavy AI usage. Author is simply not creative, and doesn't know how to setup a proper plot point, or situation for that matter. Every setup makes MC seem either incompetent or downright dumb.
sleepygood:wow.... idk what to say to that, but wow.... I'd have thrown her back into the streets. I'm glad I dropped it where I did
Hai i just thought i finally found a good vampire novel but after reading 30+ chapters i too feel dissapointed man i am just a sucker for the rare vampire novels but seems like this one is bad
B0mbaCl0ck:Well, many things aren't mentioned, but they're implied easily enough that they're obvious. But yeah.. one of MC's wives is a dirty hoe.. used like a rag by others, and acting as if she's some queen with MC. There are many nasty events in that novel anyways, even if you can ignore the heavy AI usage. Author is simply not creative, and doesn't know how to setup a proper plot point, or situation for that matter. Every setup makes MC seem either incompetent or downright dumb.
you speak to my soul. oh how badly I want a good vampire story
_blank69_:Hai i just thought i finally found a good vampire novel but after reading 30+ chapters i too feel dissapointed man i am just a sucker for the rare vampire novels but seems like this one is bad
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after reading all the comments & your review, I thought it wasn't that bad, but damn... thank you all, really
Heh, you dodged a bullet bruh.. The amount of concentrated stupidity in this novel is on another level.
StaringCat:after reading all the comments & your review, I thought it wasn't that bad, but damn... thank you all, really
can you recommend me a good novel with OP MC & Harem? kinda tired with the Weak-to-strong & single FL tropes. when I mean OP, I mean REAL Overpowered (no problem even if it's on the level like Saitama OPness). been searching but didn't found a good one.
B0mbaCl0ck:Heh, you dodged a bullet bruh.. The amount of concentrated stupidity in this novel is on another level.
The novels with OP MC aren't successful, since you eliminate the progression and major part of plot, so no, i don't. But if you want an OP MC for his level, read My Elf System and Primordial Harem System. Those are decent enough.
StaringCat:can you recommend me a good novel with OP MC & Harem? kinda tired with the Weak-to-strong & single FL tropes. when I mean OP, I mean REAL Overpowered (no problem even if it's on the level like Saitama OPness). been searching but didn't found a good one.
writing a story with an OP MC can be tough, I guess. Thanks for the recs; I’ll check them out.
B0mbaCl0ck:The novels with OP MC aren't successful, since you eliminate the progression and major part of plot, so no, i don't. But if you want an OP MC for his level, read My Elf System and Primordial Harem System. Those are decent enough.
Damn
B0mbaCl0ck:Heh, you dodged a bullet bruh.. The amount of concentrated stupidity in this novel is on another level.
"My three wives are beautiful vampires" if you haven't read it. But be careful it is a weak to strong type of novel, but it is really enjoyable, the best I've read here on Webnovel. By the way it has a huge Harem, at the current chapter there are over 50 girls. But I really recommend it, it is also very funny to read.
StaringCat:can you recommend me a good novel with OP MC & Harem? kinda tired with the Weak-to-strong & single FL tropes. when I mean OP, I mean REAL Overpowered (no problem even if it's on the level like Saitama OPness). been searching but didn't found a good one.
