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This is my first try on a review that looks at least a little bit professional, so cut me some slack. The Story: With only a short time to live Tian Long decides to bet everything! And it worked: Reborn as Davis Loret crown prince of the Loret empire he is reborn in a cultivation world. Starting from the age of five he starts to cultivate, to reach heights never seen before. But the world is bigger than he thought. The limit he thought of was a mere stepping stone for others. But with a secret weapon from his first live at his side he decides to start his unique cultivation journey. Accompanied by his beloved wives he will go down in history as the 'Divine Emperor of Death'. 1. Writing quality: I don't have any problems with it. The grammar and the spelling errors are restricted to an absolute minimum from my POV. For me it's a high quality work. The author can be proud 5/5 ⭐ 2. Story development: At the beginning the author takes his time. The MC is for a couple of hundred chapters underage, some won't like it and normally I would also fit in that category, but the author has such a unique story that, that doesn't matter to me. You can visibly see the formation the author lays for the later chapters and the more you read the more complex the world becomes. By the latest chapter, you literally feel like you lived the whole life next to the MC and boy is it fulfilling. Another thing I realized, is that the story never becomes boring and leaves you most of the time on the edge. Sure it does take some time before the harem starts to thrive, but the development is extremely realistic. Why? Because the MC comes from the modern world and his thinking is still stuck there, only slowly does he start to change. All in all a very good and reasonable story development. 5/5 ⭐ 3. Characters: First of all the MC is amazing and what I really like is that almost from the beginning does he throw most of his morals regarding life and death out of the window, the reason is told later in the story. You don't go through what the MC goes through without a major change. The MC grows with every challenge and matures more and more. Unique to him is that the reader can identify himself with the MC. The other characters also have their time to shine, but the more the story goes on the more is the focus on the women in the Harem, but I think that is ok, I even like it. Also none of the women or the other characters are one-dimensional, they all have their own quirks, insecurities and flaws, that's what makes them even better. Another good thing is, the MC doesn't leave his women behind, they all are together on this journey. 5/5 ⭐ 4. Update stability Two chapters a day is very reasonable and the author doesn't fall behind. For such a complex world it is very good. For a non-professional author (I think) two chapters a day are amazing. For those who want even more chapters, you don't know how hard it is to write so shut up. Respect to the author for this stability for more than six! years. 5. World building: At the beginning the world seems big, but boy are we wrong, it is very rare to see such a big, complex world, where most of the things even make sense. Even the unique cultivation system is amazing, it takes some time for the readers to get used to it, but in the end you will definitely like it. Warning Spoiler: From a single continent to a territory that is big enough for the single continent to look like a droop in the ocean. And as of the current chapter there are hints of a world beyond the true immortal world. A very satisfying world building and it even makes sense. 5/5 ⭐ Conclusion: One of the best novels I ever read and I mean not only on Webnovel but even IRL books. Simply mind-blowing. A definitive recommendation from my side.
Like the door of the Limbo said "the one who walks between life and death"
At least she has her priorities straight
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
King Arthur, Lancelot, Gawain, Hercules, Siegfried, Scathach, Joan of Arc
I don't think everyone is against Yuri per se, but against Yuri in a harem. I mean I wouldn't like it if my girls get pleasure from another girl,even if it is in the harem. If it were two random girls, I couldn't care less, but if it were my girls that is a no-go, that would mean they derive pleasure from another person other than me. Important things must be said twice!
If the other is finished, will you pick up this novel?
Thanks for the answer, these are the best MCs, the socio and psychopaths, who care only about there loved ones😍