Item: Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king
Rating: 4.4
Author: BottomlessShadow

BottomlessShadowLv149mth

2024-03-17 01:01

You are building the world background quite nicely. And I love how you are clear about the personality of the characters. And how you progress the story with a clear goal in mind

Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king

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