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BottomlessShadow

BottomlessShadow

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Love reading novels especially genres like fantasy and urban

2020-03-21 JoinedUnited States
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow1d
    Commented

    Violation emotional damage

    "Maybe because right before that, I was the one keeping other kids from being killed by the vines. If the sage killed everyone who kept Kollar safe, that would probably only leave behind people like you, huh?"
    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow8d
    Commented

    😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

    After my daughter was born, I unexpectedly got bound to the "Super Web Novel Dad System".
    I Just Want Outlive You, Don't Force Me to Beat You to Death
    Eastern · Nine Lamps and Goodness
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow8d
    Posted

    Normally I would wait longer to write review, but after reading the 12 chapters available at this time I wasn’t able to resist. First of all great wringing and depicting of the story I feel like I can imagine the real thing. And great character development as you gave a reason for the main character to hate the cybernetic society but the world background needs a bit more development I know you think it’s better to add later on and make t may depending on where your leading the story you could have added more world background through the chapter but reveal it little by little like in a third person perspective. But I love the story so far and I hope it continues to be that great

    Crimson Genesis: Vengeance of Genetic Evolution
    Sci-fi · Loki_Magikill
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow12d
    Commented

    No it’s not and I hate this mentality many people graduate high school don’t go to college and get a blue collar job and make more money that they can keep that people go to college

    "Getting into a sufficiently good college is a precondition for me to avoid ending up like a low-life trash, like my father and you. That's a precondition for changing my fate!" Tommy Hawk said with emphasis, lowly growling at Tony.
    America 1982
    Urban · A spoonful of the past
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow27d
    Commented

    If you don’t sell your stolen goods to him he arrests you

    Frank curled his lip and said, "You could say that, but... he actually has a public identity, which is the Deputy Chief of the Bogota police department in charge specifically of theft and robbery cases."
    Mercenary King: Got Question? Ask My RPG!
    Urban · Just Like Water
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow28d
    Commented

    😊😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂I’m him

    [Keke, I don't need a damn system. I'm HIM!]
    Sovereign Of The Skies
    Fantasy · JayModii
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow1mth
    Commented

    He should become a living formation with formations on all parts of his body except his private parts

    "That was fun, I wonder what other types of beasts are there." He turned his attention back to the corpse, a small blade made of condensed light materialized on his index finger. He held the snake head which was surprisingly still alive despite the main body being dead.
    Father of Eternity
    Fantasy · Eternal_Federation
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow1mth
    Commented

    But emotions should be managed and controlled and not affect your decision it’s okay to have them but do not make decisions with them

    Isaiah shook his head as he walked down the stairs to his casino's main entertainment area, "Emotions are essential as while an emotionless being might operate better, one with emotions learns better. Letting go of your sense of self is a trap for short term power."
    Father of Eternity
    Fantasy · Eternal_Federation
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow1mth
    Commented

    😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

    "Damn it, people use condoms for pleasure, and here I am using a condom for the first time just to stay alive. Others use it on a woman, but damn it, I'm tasting the damn condom myself. Hell, I might as well die."
    Mercenary's War
    War · Just Like Water
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow1mth
    Replied to Azurian_Element

    Are you dropping this novel

    Valkron's Vampire God
    Fantasy · Azurian_Element
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow1mth
    Commented

    Yeah for a character like him a strong women matching his attributes and personality would be good not a harem

    A/N: I've never really been good with writing Battle scenes, and to be honest this was my first one being on a large scale such as a war
    Valkron's Vampire God
    Fantasy · Azurian_Element
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow2mth
    Commented

    You know, I have been considering watching that show

    - "And this was how I met your mother."
    A Song of Blood and Sunlight
    Book&Literature · Trafford
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow2mth
    Commented

    😅😅😅😅

    "Who's the evilest of them all?"
    Criminal X : Epitome Of Evil
    Fantasy · KhyaaL
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow2mth
    Posted

    You are building the world background quite nicely. And I love how you are clear about the personality of the characters. And how you progress the story with a clear goal in mind

    Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king
    War · Allevatore_dicapre
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  • BottomlessShadow
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    Commented

    He has a great understanding of himself I wish people in the real world understood themselves like he does

    'I would rather feel empty after killing than to feel gracious after forgiving.'
    Criminal X : Epitome Of Evil
    Fantasy · KhyaaL
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow2mth
    Commented

    You can’t have peace without a deterrent

    <<''Sī vīs pācem, parā bellum''>> <<"If you want peace, prepare for war".>>
    The return of the fallen king
    History · Allevatore_dicapre
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow2mth
    Commented

    This quote is so true

    "A diplomat who says "yes" means "maybe", a diplomat who says "maybe" means "no", and a diplomat who says "no" is no diplomat."
    The return of the fallen king
    History · Allevatore_dicapre
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow2mth
    Replied to Death_Sounds

    Fatale injuries

    "50 Million murders. 70 Million half murders. 100 Million attempted murders. Successful assassinations of 10 presidents of Germany, 9 presidents of Poland, 6 presidents of Russia, 5 presidents of America, 8 prime ministers of the United Kingdom, also 4 Kings and Queens of the same country. And that's not all.."
    Criminal X : Epitome Of Evil
    Fantasy · KhyaaL
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  • BottomlessShadow
    BottomlessShadow2mth
    Replied to Allevatore_dicapre

    😂😂😂

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    Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king
    War · Allevatore_dicapre
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  • BottomlessShadow
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    Commented

    Nice

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    Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king
    War · Allevatore_dicapre
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