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Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor9mth
2024-03-11 00:58

Hey guys, shameless author is here! This is my last work , which I hope it will go well. The starting chapters will be about defining the worl-building of the novel, also the work will follow many stories even though the main one will be of the mc. I hope that you will like it , as I believe it will be my best one

Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king

Allevatore_dicapre
4.5
314 Chs

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That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

Why is it your last?

9mth
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Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

If this does not go well I Will take a pause from writimg for a bit

That_Annoying_guy:Why is it your last?
9mth
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That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

Thanks for replying

Allevatore_dicapre:If this does not go well I Will take a pause from writimg for a bit
9mth
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Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Is there seggs and harem in this novel?

9mth
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Is he going to make a mercenary guild ?

9mth
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Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

no mercenary company

Romance_guy:Is he going to make a mercenary guild ?
9mth
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

Allevatore_dicapre:no mercenary company
9mth
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

I think you spying try getting more people to review

7mth
Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

ah?

Romance_guy:I think you spying try getting more people to review
7mth
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Should

Allevatore_dicapre:ah?
7mth
somerandomguy1204
somerandomguy1204Lv12

so is he a one man army?

Allevatore_dicapre:no mercenary company
5mth
Wilder6
Wilder6Lv15

Is there modern technologies and knowledge kingdom building?

5mth
Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

no warfare Is goong to be pre gunpowder

Wilder6:Is there modern technologies and knowledge kingdom building?
5mth
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Dantaliens
DantaliensLv14

You probably allready read the book but in case you avoided it thinking he's one man army, he's not one man army, he creates his own mercernary company ,his personal strenght is average.

somerandomguy1204:so is he a one man army?
4mth
OrgeLordBrix
OrgeLordBrixLv15

Great book so far, thank you Author! Could you repost the map as a fresh comment or add it to the description so it’s easy for us to find again if we want to look at it to better follow the journey? Thanks

3mth
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Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

I Will

OrgeLordBrix:Great book so far, thank you Author! Could you repost the map as a fresh comment or add it to the description so it’s easy for us to find again if we want to look at it to better follow the journey? Thanks
3mth
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Aeser
AeserLv5

A suggestion to focus more on the protaganist, multiple pov sometimes works, but its becoming tiring in this case, currently at chapter 45, progress of mc is lacking

2mth
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Aeser
AeserLv5

Edit: Came to like Uther and the northern prince It really just needs less focus on other characters but I love the details

Aeser:A suggestion to focus more on the protaganist, multiple pov sometimes works, but its becoming tiring in this case, currently at chapter 45, progress of mc is lacking
2mth
Geovane_De_Moraes
Geovane_De_MoraesLv11

One of the best novels I've ever read, well-developed characters and the plot is simply perfect, a masterpiece

2mth
Seikei
SeikeiLv15

I start reading just a few hour ago and you got a tag with magic but no Magic at all?

2mth
Other Reviews
huH2
huH2Lv4

overall is good but gonna stock more chapter to read this again anyway keep it up and goodluck

9mth

BottomlessShadow
BottomlessShadowLv14

You are building the world background quite nicely. And I love how you are clear about the personality of the characters. And how you progress the story with a clear goal in mind

9mth
Mattigician
MattigicianLv4

Well done to you![img=recommend][img=recommend]

9mth
nameyelus
nameyelusLv15

love your story’s love how this has begun and how it’s moving

9mth
Graziona_Pomidoras
Graziona_PomidorasLv11

The story has potential, but the beginning "world building" chapters are almost unintelligible. The story keeps jumping to different characters and it ends up completely ruined due to that.

2mth
Suk_min_Tak
Suk_min_TakLv3

novel is good, author is good, but not my type.

8d
xnet4
xnet4Lv1

It's like Game of Thrones and it's terrible... Terribly delicious! The book is great and the author of soldering stars thanks for it!-----------------------------------------------------------------

1mth
Heavy_Fizzing
Heavy_FizzingLv13

fantastic story with realistic world building and history, the most captivating part of the story is the well thought-out plot as through the multiple POV's we get a layered story of different factions and intrigue. Hope this story gets its recognition and support it deserves, good luck Author.

2mth
WetDog
WetDogLv13

Although I’ve only read 6 chapters the world building and lore is nice, I’m liking the characters so far, with only 80 chaoters it’s still like a baby book hoping to see more though. Keep up the book author I like it so far.

4mth
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