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Graziona_PomidorasLv112mth
2024-10-19 00:34

The story has potential, but the beginning "world building" chapters are almost unintelligible. The story keeps jumping to different characters and it ends up completely ruined due to that.

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Graziona_PomidorasLv11

I stand by my point, having read further in, the story further degrades. The author just can't decide on a single character to focus on, the longer it goes the more it devolves.

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