Pocket_AI

What's even the point? In hindsight, plan to get you to see a normal text was doomed from the start - you even can't read. Did you finished my comments and automatically replaced incontinent parts with blanks? That would explain a lot.

Not even commenting on leaving only one 'bad' review? It's not slander, your text at the very least is chinese. I will ask you again, but in slightly different way: 1. Open an actual english book. 2. Open popular fic (RWBY for example, never saw chinese fics about that). 3. Open translated story from this website. 4. Open your fic. Compare text. I can guarantee you that yours will be extremely different from the first two and quite like the third.

Good light story, sadly most likely dropped. ..................................................................... .......................................

I'm attacking your writing style. Feel free to feel offended if it improves it.

I'm pretty sure it's punishable to mention other websites with same type of content and it's sure as hell idiotic to post direct links. At least that is how it works almost everywhere else, so I'm not risking. Where to go to avoid chinese fics? Well definitely not here, as this is owned by 'China Literature'. Not kidding, actual company name. Literally every other popular fic website or forum is better in that regard.

You can't pin it, so you deleted/hid instead. Makes sense. That explains why there is exactly one visible bad review and it's about mistake on readers side. Just like in other shitty fics, nothing new. Please read a book, like an actual book, not a translated chinese fic - you forgot how normal text looks like.

Good, would appreciate more content about character interactions and a bit less fights. ....................................................

Either extremely basic or straight up AI. Text feels like something from anime filler: everything is extremely predictable, 'jokes' with zero funniness, characters behave like in cheap script you would find on Craigslist. At that point I genuinely want this to be an AI, hope that no human being would write this and think 'good job'.

I would... If you asked me like a year or two ago. Too much time have passed for me to remember this particular bad fic.

Dear Professional Reader, I am writing to express my sincere regret for being unable to comprehend why you even try to defend this. I understand how important this random comment on internet was to you, and I am truly sorry for any inconvenience or disappointment that my inability to not laugh at you and what you value may have caused. Please know that this decision was not made lightly, and I have carefully considered all options and alternatives. Unfortunately, due to you wearing a clown costume, I am unable to hold off my laugh. However, I would like to offer you to not read shit or stop reading at all. I hope that these options may be helpful and that we may have the opportunity to work together in the future. Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience or disappointment that my inability to appreciate piece of shit may have caused. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further questions or concerns. Sincerely, Not a professional reader(