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  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AI6 hours ago
    Posted

    Mc is 3 years before the plot in another country making private chat without any character from the original. Not something that says Solo Leveling. Like at all. And the copying powers stuff with trainings... Looks like another cultivation crap with cheating mc.

  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AI8 days ago
    Posted

    Good story, nothing extraordinary, but quite pleasant to read. The only problem is existence of ex, which feels unnecessary edgy and useless for the plot.

  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AI13 days ago
    Posted

    Please stop repeating information in dialogues. The worst thing is convincing Superboy. You mention stabilization, the time needed and other stuff AT LEAST FIVE TIMES. I get it, just stop. The same problem persists in multiversal chat - ALL their dialogues can be three times shorter without losing ANYTHING. Is this for total words count or what?

  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AIa month ago
    Posted

    Why did you make him 13-year-old? Negotiations with business partners, renting house... Who will even talk to a child about chat? Story itself is 2-3/5, not terrible, but just not interesting.

  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AI2 months ago
    Posted

    At that point just write p*rn. Finished 6 chapters, no desire to continue. Reasons: - too much mentions how handsome mc is - meaningless scenes with school bullies. Who cares about them? WOW, mc with cheats is stronger that normal humans, who could have guessed. - info repeats itself

  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AI4 months ago
    Replied to Wizened

    Yep, with good story, dialogues and not much bullshit. My favourites just happens not to be on this website)

  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AI5 months ago
    Posted

    4/10 1. Overly descriptive everything. 2. Text style changes from time to time which means inconsistency at best, AI at worst. 3. The whole Italian mafia idea seems dull and artificial with - return to the 1 - unnecessary descriptions. 4. POV of other characters are, again, dull, artificial and AI-like. To the people who give it 5 stars for "smart" mc - he is not smart, he's not an idiot at best.

  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AI5 months ago
    Posted

    Bad. Just bad. Dialogues are boring, chinese stuff is as dumb as always (Heavenly technics, constant brother/sister bullshit), imbalance template with Imbalance weapon at the beginning is not surprising. Please, read something not as atrocious as plain cultivation fics and then write.

  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AI5 months ago
    Posted

    HALF of everything in this story is just infodump of useless information. Why do you need to waste your and others time by giving detailed information about thing that you don't even use in the story? Considering there are other reviews with info about you making chapters to just increase word count - answer is obvious.

  • Pocket_AI
    Pocket_AI5 months ago
    Posted

    Grammar is really bad. If you can imagine a mistake - you will find it here. Story is in random state due to a number of characters which author handles poorly.