Pocket_AI

Good story, nothing extraordinary, but quite pleasant to read. The only problem is existence of ex, which feels unnecessary edgy and useless for the plot.

Please stop repeating information in dialogues. The worst thing is convincing Superboy. You mention stabilization, the time needed and other stuff AT LEAST FIVE TIMES. I get it, just stop. The same problem persists in multiversal chat - ALL their dialogues can be three times shorter without losing ANYTHING. Is this for total words count or what?

Why did you make him 13-year-old? Negotiations with business partners, renting house... Who will even talk to a child about chat? Story itself is 2-3/5, not terrible, but just not interesting.

At that point just write p*rn. Finished 6 chapters, no desire to continue. Reasons: - too much mentions how handsome mc is - meaningless scenes with school bullies. Who cares about them? WOW, mc with cheats is stronger that normal humans, who could have guessed. - info repeats itself

Yep, with good story, dialogues and not much bullshit. My favourites just happens not to be on this website)

4/10 1. Overly descriptive everything. 2. Text style changes from time to time which means inconsistency at best, AI at worst. 3. The whole Italian mafia idea seems dull and artificial with - return to the 1 - unnecessary descriptions. 4. POV of other characters are, again, dull, artificial and AI-like. To the people who give it 5 stars for "smart" mc - he is not smart, he's not an idiot at best.

Bad. Just bad. Dialogues are boring, chinese stuff is as dumb as always (Heavenly technics, constant brother/sister bullshit), imbalance template with Imbalance weapon at the beginning is not surprising. Please, read something not as atrocious as plain cultivation fics and then write.

HALF of everything in this story is just infodump of useless information. Why do you need to waste your and others time by giving detailed information about thing that you don't even use in the story? Considering there are other reviews with info about you making chapters to just increase word count - answer is obvious.

Grammar is really bad. If you can imagine a mistake - you will find it here. Story is in random state due to a number of characters which author handles poorly.

It's just another chinese fic where mc immediately picks up girls and become everyone's best friend in 10 seconds. Of course, he is also instantly rich and you need to know how luxurious and expensive his car is.