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brailyn_corderoLv21mth
2025-01-05 04:17

Although I find the use of the word "love" or "dear" excessive, I will not deny that the story is original and interesting. On the other hand, I think a decrease in focus on the protagonist and focus more on the development of the universe.

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Ben_CresswellAuthor

I do use it a lot, purposely excessive. The hive needs to constantly affirm their love to Apollo. So terms of endearment are fired out like bullets. I get its no everyone's cup of tea tho :D

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