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DaoistYellowBird
DaoistYellowBirdLv1510mth
2024-04-28 01:26

Although the author could improve his grammar and structure a bit, the story is amazing and fun. It’s very unique and I’m enjoying it greatly. I wish I could fast forward into the future to read the whole thing when it has all its chaps released😫. Keep it up author!

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Ben_Cresswell
Ben_CresswellAuthor

thank you I appreciate it. I 100% agree on the grammar and stuff. I'm new and while self editing things get under the radar but I try my best :D

DaoistYellowBird
DaoistYellowBirdLv15

Yee, you’re doing great!

Ben_Cresswell:thank you I appreciate it. I 100% agree on the grammar and stuff. I'm new and while self editing things get under the radar but I try my best :D
A_OV
A_OVLv13

any yuri

Ben_Cresswell:thank you I appreciate it. I 100% agree on the grammar and stuff. I'm new and while self editing things get under the radar but I try my best :D
Bookwyrm_Night
Bookwyrm_NightLv14

No.

A_OV:any yuri
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