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DaoistApe
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2024-08-11 16:16

This is really good. Over 120ch and I've enjoyed pretty much every single one. The characters are well written, and the setting is also very well done. As far as harems go, it honestly ranks up pretty high on the list. It's a premise I haven't seen before, and it's been done very well too. Thanks for writing this and sticking with it! I have a couple questions for author though. Will there be ntr/sharing/yaoi? I doubt there will, but it's always good to ask. Also will there be yuri in the harem/group activities? A lot of the non hive love interests are giving me vibes that it might happen later. It isn't a deal breaker but I'd like to know if it will happen and what "level" it would be at. If you have questions, I can help clarify 😄

The hivemind is conquering for me?

Ben_Cresswell
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HI, thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot to me. Now to answer your questions. If I am correct Yaoi means gay right? if so, no. There will be no guy on guy featuring Apollo. Sharing. Among the hive? No. They consider themselves the same being and dislike the thought of pairing up among themselves. They are happy to take turns with whatever body Apollo currently desires. Ntr... No one Apollo loves will turn their back on him if thats what you mean. Do you consider what Mindy did with her husband Ntr? I try not to make my character 1 dimensional. If they had or have existing partners, I will not just forget them, they may end up having relations. But I don't think that is what you meant. No one in Apollo's active loves will be ntr'd no.

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DaoistApe
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Thanks for the response ☺️. I will admit I'm not super in to the Mindy stuff but it's not too off putting for me. I doubt you'd add it, but I meant sharing in the sense of swinging. What's the verdict on Yuri? I know you said the hive won't, but does that mean it will happen with his other women? If it's added, what will be the extent of it? Like just during group stuff, or will they be more involved? I'll admit I'm not a fan of it in harem novels in general, but some versions of it are more tolerable imo.

Ben_Cresswell:HI, thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot to me. Now to answer your questions. If I am correct Yaoi means gay right? if so, no. There will be no guy on guy featuring Apollo. Sharing. Among the hive? No. They consider themselves the same being and dislike the thought of pairing up among themselves. They are happy to take turns with whatever body Apollo currently desires. Ntr... No one Apollo loves will turn their back on him if thats what you mean. Do you consider what Mindy did with her husband Ntr? I try not to make my character 1 dimensional. If they had or have existing partners, I will not just forget them, they may end up having relations. But I don't think that is what you meant. No one in Apollo's active loves will be ntr'd no.
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DaoistApe
DaoistApeLv4

Thanks for the answers, I appreciate it 😁! I think your recent reply was shadow banned or something, but I was able to read it through your profile. Will the potential Janine scenes be just her and some other woman, or will Apollo be involved somehow?

Ben_Cresswell:HI, thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot to me. Now to answer your questions. If I am correct Yaoi means gay right? if so, no. There will be no guy on guy featuring Apollo. Sharing. Among the hive? No. They consider themselves the same being and dislike the thought of pairing up among themselves. They are happy to take turns with whatever body Apollo currently desires. Ntr... No one Apollo loves will turn their back on him if thats what you mean. Do you consider what Mindy did with her husband Ntr? I try not to make my character 1 dimensional. If they had or have existing partners, I will not just forget them, they may end up having relations. But I don't think that is what you meant. No one in Apollo's active loves will be ntr'd no.
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Ben_Cresswell
Ben_CresswellAuthor

I'm not sure yet, I don't want to spoil or say anything that may change. but feel free to ask questions as you read. I will always try to answer them

DaoistApe:Thanks for the answers, I appreciate it 😁! I think your recent reply was shadow banned or something, but I was able to read it through your profile. Will the potential Janine scenes be just her and some other woman, or will Apollo be involved somehow?
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DaoistApe
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That's completely fair. I hope you and your novel do well 😁

Ben_Cresswell:I'm not sure yet, I don't want to spoil or say anything that may change. but feel free to ask questions as you read. I will always try to answer them
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