Item: Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water
Rating: 5
Author: Lord_Sleepless_

Lord_Sleepless_Lv31yr

2024-02-15 06:22

Love the concept, and the way the book was written(The style of the book), and I also really like how u released 12 chapters in just one day, that one won me in, on top of that the synopsis was pretty nice. Really love the book keep up the good work author!

Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water

JPNovelFan

4.4

414 Chs

Liked by 3 people

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JPNovelFanAuthor

Thank you for the kind words! I’m going to build a stockpile of chapters the next few days and this weekend when I’m off work. I have two more chapters already ready to be posted later today. I will try and do 2 a day minimum for the next few days. Once I get a nice stockpile I plan to just rush towards 50+ chapters quickly. I’ve already got the plot lines mostly figured out for the first hundred chapters. Please look forward to it.

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Lord_Sleepless_Lv3

Looking forward to the new chapters man. Have a great rest of your day(or night!)!!

JPNovelFan:Thank you for the kind words! I’m going to build a stockpile of chapters the next few days and this weekend when I’m off work. I have two more chapters already ready to be posted later today. I will try and do 2 a day minimum for the next few days. Once I get a nice stockpile I plan to just rush towards 50+ chapters quickly. I’ve already got the plot lines mostly figured out for the first hundred chapters. Please look forward to it.

1yr

TT_CCLv1

If you’re reahding this then your parents will dide in 5 yearss. To undo this curse you have to paste this comment on 5 more Manga. I’m so sorry please forgive m

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