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Lord_Sleepless_5dReplied to PancakesWitchIt's like having a samurai with god-like sword skills but the samurai has no armor, due to his incredible sword skills he almost never gets hit but even when he does he is able to use footwork, sword skills and overall dexterity and ability to use body properly to only be nicked by the attack, if you give him some light armor, even though the armor is incredibly light and barley helps it still does help, albeit not very much.
"I certainly couldn't." He spoke. "There was the existence of things such as Talents and more, I remember the Titans in collaboration with the Spirits made those pillars, that awakened inner Talents inside of your Soul, and allowed you to further evolve them. It was a way for the weaker races to become a bit stronger. We Dragons never required such tricks, however. We are born almighty."- Lord_Sleepless_8dReplied to Chase_Howell_5724
This dude can't spell for the life of him so I will translate it for y'all: "Our MC only cares for what he wants to care for, or what concerns him, such as becoming powerful so that nothing can hurt him and his loved ones, which is his goal in his life. To become strong he needs nutrition and nutrition comes from food, thus why should he give his food to others and keep himself from achieving his goal? He's not a goody two shoes or a bad person, he simply is HIM"
'I hunted this game! This meat is mine, MINE! They will only be allowed to eat my scraps when and if I want so!' - Lord_Sleepless_10dCommented
weaving through the car interior sounds weird, you could use spread through or sum else
This paragraph has been deleted. - Lord_Sleepless_21dReplied to HansDojo
What makes us any different from animals? we are simply smarter animals, we are not gods or anything special, we are just born with different talents, the fact that you see us humans as above everything else is incredibly egotistical. Also, the fact that you believe that anyone should live a life of pain and suffering rather than experience tranquility is genuinely incredible.
Of course Rock wasn't his real name, but a nickname given to him by the people working in the construction site with him as he didn't like to talk that much. Rock didn't have a real name from his parents, he was an orphan, and he grew up in a house complex owned by the government for orphaned children. The government sends food to those houses once a week but it wasn't enough for the kids there to feed themselves. The orphanages were all full and that's why the government created these houses and sent food to the children but a lot of them still died due to hunger or illnesses as there was no one to take care of them even when they were ill. Rock stayed there until he was 12. He could fight the other children for the food, but even then it was not enough to feed himself so he decided to leave. - Lord_Sleepless_21dReplied to Pumaz
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Approaching us with a wide grin that matched his wild energy, he boomed, "By the King, I've never witnessed youngsters as audacious as you!" His gaze danced between us, briefly pausing on Ynos before a nod of approval followed. "You must be the esteemed destroyer's family," he declared, his voice carrying a blend of camaraderie and respect. - Lord_Sleepless_22dReplied to HansDojo
bc of how much we fear death everyone thinks death is the worst thing ever, but it's not. In reality, death is the single most tranquil and enjoyable thing ever, the only bad thing about death is that to kill someone you must damage them until their life is extinguished which usually is excruciatingly painful. However, abortion isn't painful as, BABIES, don't unlock [conciscnouss skill] until age level 4 so fetuses will not feel it at all. So what you are saying is that you would rather have a helpless baby suffer than let said baby experience the greatest form of tranquility and happiness. Also I'm not suicidal and yes I know I sound like I am, and to the people who are, know even if no one else loves you, I do.
Of course Rock wasn't his real name, but a nickname given to him by the people working in the construction site with him as he didn't like to talk that much. Rock didn't have a real name from his parents, he was an orphan, and he grew up in a house complex owned by the government for orphaned children. The government sends food to those houses once a week but it wasn't enough for the kids there to feed themselves. The orphanages were all full and that's why the government created these houses and sent food to the children but a lot of them still died due to hunger or illnesses as there was no one to take care of them even when they were ill. Rock stayed there until he was 12. He could fight the other children for the food, but even then it was not enough to feed himself so he decided to leave. - Lord_Sleepless_1mthReplied to HighOffStupid
Nope it was a great terror that sunny fought as a saint
So, a Nightmare Creature with five Soul Cores of the Awakened Rank would be called an Awakened Tyrant, while one with four Soul Cores of the Fallen Rank would be called a Fallen Devil. - Lord_Sleepless_1mthReplied to John_Doe_777
I get you, idk about you but for me the thought of re-writing or editing a chapter genuinely hurts my brain, so I can see how difficult it is to re-write a chapter.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Lord_Sleepless_1mthReplied to NobleQueenBee
The almighty Insomniac one!
'Paradise in Red, Sleepless, Snowmobile and Thorai. Do any of those names ring a bell for you, Fire?' - Lord_Sleepless_1mthReplied to nonsensefree
Ninjago sunny
The third gentleman, Snowmobile, was the most enigmatic of the three. His face was covered by a horned mask that reminded the Queen of a certain duelist she would rather not think about just now. - Lord_Sleepless_1mthCommented
The insomniac one, Sleepless, leader of the DawnBreak.
'Paradise in Red, Sleepless, Snowmobile and Thorai. Do any of those names ring a bell for you, Fire?' - Lord_Sleepless_1mthCommented
"only one thing is clear.....only you are truly free to make your own fate." ---> "only one thing is clear... only you are truly free to make your own fate." More than 3 dots in an ellipsis is improper grammar and can tick off readers and even cause them to drop the book, there should also be a space after the ellipsis as a lack of space is also improper grammar. Hope the constructive criticism is helpful!
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Everyone yapping about, "B-b-but It's an Undead!" or "W-w-what if it's just weak!" y'all, to put it bluntly, are dumb. Explain to me how a creature of higher rank and core can be so easily slaughtered by a human, and mind you, humans are already weak compared to beasts and nightmare creatures, that is not even dormant or seems to have a powerful weapon.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Lord_Sleepless_1mthReplied to Borloin
Man steal ovary*
"Whatever. Just fix up my Kirby and don't mess things up. Larkinson or not, I'll string you by the balls if you cost me my revenge." - Lord_Sleepless_1mthReplied to Voidz_Zero
The point is that Men are the masters of Mechs, and no matter what they can do we still are the ones who gave them that capability and the ones who command them as we see right thus you are wrong as well as incredibly dumb, and yes, it genuinely hurt to read this chain of comments.
Ves naturally refused to adopt such a servile philosophy. He believed that men were masters over the machine. No matter how sophisticated the mech, it's still created as a vehicle for a pilot to protect or destroy. Naturally, with his recent studies of the X-Factor, his views had adjusted slightly, but only in the sense that mechs performed best when they were created as similar-minded partners to their pilots. There was no need to go overboard and act as if humans were the slaves in this relationship. - Lord_Sleepless_1mthReplied to Evelyn_Wiles
they the same thing bc whatever their leaking is kinda like their life blood, the way blood is for us, the mech blood probably isn't as important for them as our blood is for us tho.
TheSeventhSnake had already decoupled and tossed aside his slagged rifle. With his twin heated knives he struck the damaged and bleeding mech in its head and upper torso. He landed with so much momentum behind him that the knives tore through the remnants of the heavy mech's armor and ruined several of its critical systems, the most important of which was the power reactor embedded near the heart area. - Lord_Sleepless_1mthCommented
X-factor again
"Death!" TheSeventhSnake yelled as he exerted his Seraphim to the utmost, managing to slowly close the distance at the cost of overheating his mech's wings. "I can take it! My mech is meant to rule the skies!" - Lord_Sleepless_1mthCommented
This is X-factor
That was okay, because Snake increased his speed and approached with fury. His heart pumped faster and his brain went into a heightened state. His Seraphim holstered the rifle on his back, which was difficult with the wings in the way, and retrieved a pair of heated knives. Like the fangs of a predator, he wielded them in a reserve grip and rocketed in a charging attack towards the enemy flier. - Lord_Sleepless_1mthReplied to ritmmrngthm
Who's name is mat
Ves smiled ruefully when he heard those words. "The bigwigs probably aren't interested in a small businessman like me. I'm not one of those geniuses with fancy degrees from Mars or Estelon." - Lord_Sleepless_1mthCommented
He's both... He's a black person
"You asshole! Are you a monkey or a man? Stand still for a moment!"