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2024-02-26 00:19

Shameless author giving myself a 5 star review to help promote my novel. Doing my best to try and attempt at least one chapter a day, but please forgive me if I experience writer’s block and can’t achieve that. I’m doing my best. 🙇

Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water

JPNovelFan
4.5
332 Chs

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ShowmikBD
ShowmikBDLv4

is there romance

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JPNovelFan
JPNovelFanAuthor

There will be eventually. I’m slowly going to build it. No harem, but one main female character.

ShowmikBD:is there romance
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theSeeker
theSeekerLv3

who's it?

JPNovelFan:There will be eventually. I’m slowly going to build it. No harem, but one main female character.
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JPNovelFan
JPNovelFanAuthor

The character Lustria! They’re still children at the start of this story so it is hard to develop anything super meaningful, but in one of my most recent chapters, 248, they meet again after a few years apart and maturing, now in their 15s and 16s age, so peak puberty by normal Earth Standards, but a bit more mature by Nexaria standards and their cute crushing on each other keeps that spark lit for another future arc when they’re not so limited by their sects and have grown some more.

theSeeker:who's it?
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NineTailedPhoenix
NineTailedPhoenixLv15

it's a good story decently paced with some rougher areas around world building. my biggest gripe is the ages thing. everyone lives to 10,000. what ages is it normal for people to have children in the world the main character is interacting with people at minimum 1,300 but none of them have kids even though they mature at 18 it seems.

1mth

Warmaisach
WarmaisachLv15

Reveal spoiler

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Lord_Sleepless_
Lord_Sleepless_Lv3

Love the concept, and the way the book was written(The style of the book), and I also really like how u released 12 chapters in just one day, that one won me in, on top of that the synopsis was pretty nice. Really love the book keep up the good work author!

10mth
OGC
OGCLv4

Extremely good story! The plot is well thought out. The descriptions and writing quality are out of this world. If you happen to come across this review, give the novel a try!

9mth
GooseOverlord
GooseOverlordLv15

I’ll keep this short, as I’m not very far in the book. The age of the characters is a very big issue for me, 8 year olds don’t act like that, shit sometimes 18 year old don’t act like these characters. The age really pulls you out of the narrative. I’m trying to slog through these chapters because the idea of the story seems interesting but I really do hate reading about children doing these types of things.

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RingofStone
RingofStoneLv11

great world and character design. i can't wait to see where the story goes.

5mth
RingofStone
RingofStoneLv11

Great writing and an inspired story. Can't wait for more.

7mth
ThirdLegSan
ThirdLegSanLv1

Very slow, if you're not a fan of super long descriptions and wordcount filler, this isnt the book for you. Author needs to work on making the characters dialogue feel natural and less robotic.

9mth
Frequency_420
Frequency_420Lv15

Book is really good love the way it’s unfolding so far can’t wait till the mc gets stronger and the battles evolve to a whole new level

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