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Gh0st00
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2024-02-14 20:17

I haven't read it yet but what kind of story is good if it doesn't even have a little romance in it if all it will pertain to is mostly technology sounds like a somebody ain't never had any relationships don't know how to write a romance and it ain't got to be all about it but I would like him to have some kind of partner you know like Natasha or something

Marvel in Between Flesh and Steel.

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aFreesiaFlower
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Odil
OdilLv14

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Cruel_Death
Cruel_DeathLv3

why though ?

Odil:
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Cruel_Death
Cruel_DeathLv3

why what does it mean ?

aFreesiaFlower:
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Cruel_Death
Cruel_DeathLv3

I agree, living the life of a Buddhist monk is never an option. But to be honest, Natasha is a...

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DaoistqsoWie
DaoistqsoWieLv1

Are you saying this without reading it? I may be remembering wrong, but there was no romance in "Revenend Instanity". I think the problem is not in the novel but in your mindset. What makes a novel stand out is its story and world building. In a novel with good world building like Marvel, all the writer has to do is write a good story .

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AvengerV
AvengerVLv4

revenend ? is a good and interesting lecture but at the end what is the goal of mc in that novel ? the life is mix of all colours and people need at least a few of each one to be completed and if someone think i am smoking the colours are meaningful experienciences .

DaoistqsoWie:Are you saying this without reading it? I may be remembering wrong, but there was no romance in "Revenend Instanity". I think the problem is not in the novel but in your mindset. What makes a novel stand out is its story and world building. In a novel with good world building like Marvel, all the writer has to do is write a good story .
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PeaceBeforeImpact
PeaceBeforeImpactLv15

the expressing go touch grass means to go out and live a little. experience the world Etc

Cruel_Death:why what does it mean ?
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Cruel_Death
Cruel_DeathLv3

Reverend insanity***

DaoistqsoWie:Are you saying this without reading it? I may be remembering wrong, but there was no romance in "Revenend Instanity". I think the problem is not in the novel but in your mindset. What makes a novel stand out is its story and world building. In a novel with good world building like Marvel, all the writer has to do is write a good story .
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Cruel_Death
Cruel_DeathLv3

PeaceBeforeImpact:the expressing go touch grass means to go out and live a little. experience the world Etc
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DaoistqsoWie
DaoistqsoWieLv1

Writing the main character's purpose and motivation and making it interesting depends entirely on the talent of the writer. Romance and harem have nothing to do with it. There are very effective ways to increase the character's motivation in a fantasy world.

AvengerV:revenend ? is a good and interesting lecture but at the end what is the goal of mc in that novel ? the life is mix of all colours and people need at least a few of each one to be completed and if someone think i am smoking the colours are meaningful experienciences .
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DaoistqsoWie
DaoistqsoWieLv1

👍👍👍

Cruel_Death:Reverend insanity***
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Dominic_Zibuda
Dominic_ZibudaLv4

L take

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Juliusk
JuliuskLv4

Touch grass lil bro. One piece has no romance but look at it. It’s the one of the biggest and most successful series to date. You don’t need romance to write a good story.

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Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

well excuse me my personal opinion one piece was just one piling stink of garbage but to each their own

Juliusk:Touch grass lil bro. One piece has no romance but look at it. It’s the one of the biggest and most successful series to date. You don’t need romance to write a good story.
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Juliusk
JuliuskLv4

To each their own.

Gh0st00:well excuse me my personal opinion one piece was just one piling stink of garbage but to each their own
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EroSpatula
EroSpatulaLv4

Well while I do agree it’s a bit of a bummer that there will be no romance, it isn’t really a big deal. After all, this is a book based on tech, the main character (I presume, I haven’t read this either) would be more focused on surviving a world where aliens invade every 2 weeks and a big purple raisin alien would snap him out of existence in the near future, rather than looking for some girl to romance with. Also just imo Marvel women isn’t really my thing, DC women is much more appealing.

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ZhourongHephaestus
ZhourongHephaestusLv14

Gh0st00:well excuse me my personal opinion one piece was just one piling stink of garbage but to each their own
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Cat_Tip
Cat_TipLv14

This is the stupidest review in the world I haven’t read It either and was looking at reviews but who reviews something they haven’t read yet.

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Primordial_Two
Primordial_TwoLv5

dont worry, there are worse for even less

Cat_Tip:This is the stupidest review in the world I haven’t read It either and was looking at reviews but who reviews something they haven’t read yet.
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Indra_lord
Indra_lordLv4

When I see the name of the novel. From the moment I understood the weakness of my flesh, it disgusted me. I craved to the strength and certainty of steel. I aspired to the purity of the blessed machine. Your kind cling to your flesh as if it will not decay and fail you. One day the crude biomass that you called a temple will wither and you'll beg my kind to save you. But I am already saved. For the machine is immortal. Even in death i serve the Omnissiah.

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Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15

I like the novel and idea but I’m really getting beyond sick of people using chat gpt. It’s so robotic and dry and makes the novel feel so fake it’s hard to describe but it makes the story feel so dry.

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tt_g
tt_gLv4

It’s a decent story but the writing quality is really bad. Every once in a while the author uses the script-dialogue thing where there’s the character’s name followed by colons. I always hate those and I understand using it for writing interviews and stuff but even then the author wrote like the most generic responses and interview questions ever. I think the author stopped doing the script-dialogue thing in later chapters since I don’t see them anymore but now they have a new problem. They really like starting off paragraphs with a character’s name and comma as an introductory modifier, which isn’t a problem, but they do it for several paragraphs in a row so it actually looks like they’re writing from a template. Creative writing is supposed to be creative, and writing like that gets boring real fast.

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Athan1098
Athan1098Lv4

No harem or romance, you’re already my favorite author.

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warmonger0007
warmonger0007Lv14

this is boring and dry ,Chatgpt made it boring and dry,author edit your Chatgpt story to make it seem natural at least

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Bogdan7
Bogdan7Lv6

just another AI generated story.........

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Elyk_Graham
Elyk_GrahamLv4

Love the idea of the story but it feel more like a bunch of recaps on what the mic did than an actual story

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Lizrock
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Darth_Ullyses
Darth_UllysesLv5

this is good.. (if this is translated then the translator did a good job)Keep us the excellent work 👏 👏 👏 👏

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