Item: Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator
Rating: 2.8
Author: RagingMutant

RagingMutantLv1511mth

2024-04-29 14:21

Just read all the free chapters (so up to chapter 45) unfortunately the story seems to focus more on some random character that is introduced than the main character. In 45 chapters nothing really happened. In fact within the first 15 chapters the main characters system goes through an update that basically disables his ability that makes him special for 3 months. All in all reading it felt like a waste of time and the story doesn’t really flow in a smooth manner. I don’t know if this would even qualify as junk food. I’m not paying for chapters as the free chapters didn’t justify it. If anyone else has and it somehow does a 180 in quality let me know.

Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator

Death_Simulation

4.0

82 Chs

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Death_SimulationAuthor

Thank for trying and pointing but for you informing you. In last two chapters, his System have recovered and now on the go for big story. I was just developing story in initial chapters but now it’s all set

11mth

Death_SimulationAuthor

But I appreciate your efforts for reading the novel.

11mth

RagingMutantLv15

Okay that makes sense. I will let some more chapters collect and then read it another time. Some novels out there disable systems, curse their MC’s, or give them soul damage that lasts like 200 chapters just to drag out a story. It can be incredibly frustrating. I understand wanting to keep progression stable but it shouldn’t be caused by debilitating damage.

Death_Simulation:Thank for trying and pointing but for you informing you. In last two chapters, his System have recovered and now on the go for big story. I was just developing story in initial chapters but now it’s all set

11mth

Death_SimulationAuthor

Thanks for understanding

RagingMutant:Okay that makes sense. I will let some more chapters collect and then read it another time. Some novels out there disable systems, curse their MC’s, or give them soul damage that lasts like 200 chapters just to drag out a story. It can be incredibly frustrating. I understand wanting to keep progression stable but it shouldn’t be caused by debilitating damage.

11mth

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Death_SimulationAuthor

The author here. Thoughts? Do tell me what you think in the reviews. Enjoy the book. This is for WSA, so I would appreciate power stones once that opens up. Have fun guys. Comment if you have any questions.

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Death_SimulationAuthor

Thank you for giving my book a read, I won’t go to much into detail but if you have any questions before diving in just let me know!

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Angry_ReviewerLv13

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Solor1Lv3

To many POV make the history hard to follow and a little boring. The start is good but i would love more focus on the MC. Besive the score i belive that could be a great history

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CrazyNoahVLv15

I think this would be a good novel if I could actually read it without having to pause and comprehend what the author was trying to say. I’m guessing the authors first language isn’t English which good job I only know English but if you want a more coherent read for native English speakers try downloading grammerly.

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I don’t care what other may say about this story if what they are saying is bad because I am deeply interested in it.

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