What can I say? The author doesn't have the knowledge or wisdom of human interactions to pull off this novel. There's a lot of nonsensical situations and interactions. The concept is good though but the logic sequences for the character interactions leaves one wanting. I only read the first few chapters. Maybe the author picks his game up later on. Personally I'd rewrite from the beginning to fix some discrepancies. I.E. It is supposed to find a shelter. The MC finds one seemingly immediately after leaving his start point shelter. Start point shelters have newbie protection. But the protection is voided as soon as you leave the room? That doesn't make sense. There's no food or water in the room. You have to leave just to find food, water, and to relieve yourself. What's the point of newbie protection?
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