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Solor1
Solor1Lv37mth
2024-05-19 05:16

To many POV make the history hard to follow and a little boring. The start is good but i would love more focus on the MC. Besive the score i belive that could be a great history

Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator

Death_Simulation
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The author here. Thoughts? Do tell me what you think in the reviews. Enjoy the book. This is for WSA, so I would appreciate power stones once that opens up. Have fun guys. Comment if you have any questions.

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Thank you for giving my book a read, I won’t go to much into detail but if you have any questions before diving in just let me know!

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Yeng_Sensei
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what is with the book cover? xD dude got three hand or is it supposed to be a skill?

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Angry_Reviewer
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unintelligible gibberish, don't know if it is because the translator is incompetent or the writer is incompetent but it amounts to the same thing, this is unreadable nonsense.

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Reveal spoiler

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Nathan_Huyghe
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I think this would be a good novel if I could actually read it without having to pause and comprehend what the author was trying to say. I’m guessing the authors first language isn’t English which good job I only know English but if you want a more coherent read for native English speakers try downloading grammerly.

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