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CouchPotatoDandyLv59mth
2024-05-29 04:17

My take on this fanfic is that the also had great aspirations however executed in badly. The MC got reincarnated and just like all those betta fanfictions, he started acting like a child immediately. Why can't he acts like his age of 20+ year old??? The author tries to explain it as the reasons for his softness is because he was an orphan in his previous lives and now he has a father and mother who loves him. But his juvenile acting and forgetfulness is still an issue for me. So I got to chapter 27 and I couldn't take it anymore and I stopped reading.

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i_love_cultivationLv15

Understandable to think that Reincarnation and Transmigration are the same. but they arent at least not to me. Reincarnation is when you die and then reborn. Transmigration is when the physical body is transported to a different world. Now if the soul is taken to another world and put in another body, but the original body is left behind i class this as posession. i say all that because this mc actually had to go through the whole growing up phaze again. it would be too weird to see a 2yr old speaking like he a graduated college.

CouchPotatoDandyLv5

Agree with you, and thanks for the clarification. But what about acting maturely? I understand about not wanting to draw attention, so he needs act child like. But that doesn't explain him acting like a child when he's alone or his forgetfulness or stupid decision ect..

i_love_cultivation:Understandable to think that Reincarnation and Transmigration are the same. but they arent at least not to me. Reincarnation is when you die and then reborn. Transmigration is when the physical body is transported to a different world. Now if the soul is taken to another world and put in another body, but the original body is left behind i class this as posession. i say all that because this mc actually had to go through the whole growing up phaze again. it would be too weird to see a 2yr old speaking like he a graduated college.
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