IF YOU THINK THIS IS A GIRL THEN YOU'RE PERVERT

I’m giving an honest rating, I got interested in this after reading a 1star and felt like this deserves some attention. This fic is the typical Percy Jackson or Greek oc fic, with a slightly edgy kid who hates the Gods. This is a fun read if you want a simple or quick Percy Jackson book, but it has no actual background in Greek Mythology. Characters are portrayed wrongly and for some reason there’s tons of poems or spells or something that takes up like 12+ lines of nonsense. Read for quickness and fun, not if you want something realistic or in-depth

It started very well, but as soon as he left his house the story declined quite a bit, I mean, the story was filled with holes in the plot that the author fills in the comments and that, if you don't read the comments you will have no idea what happens, besides quite ugly nerfs, such as going from 500 shadows to only 150 or that the MC is "Equal" with Luke when that should not be possible, even if Luke has "experience" fighting if when he met the MC he lost immediately.

My opinion? The story had good potential, but it started to fall apart the moment other characters were introduced, becoming... A complete disappointment, why? Their depth is non-existent, their personality is not well developed, and above all... I feel as if I was seeing an ignoble person with a superior complex when seeing the protagonist and his attitudes, in addition, he has a naivety that irritates me, teaching and basically giving power to other characters, any of which can betray you when considering that Gods have mental manipulation in their hands... Sigh, anyway, the last part is just my personal opinion and not that of a reader like the rest... ..

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Author really love nerfing in very uncreative way possibly, what i even expect even in his marvel story spider woman got betten by unknown oc because apparently he got more experience and now luke is equal in lucian when the mc has years of training haha, i tried ignoring those plot holes in early like buttons in blood weapon when it's mentally link, lesson learned from this author

Quality of the sorry gets worse as it goes. Mc gets a massive nerf. The nerf was reasonable but then we saw how big it actually was the next chapter. Mc isn’t smart at all and constantly limits himself in fights causing him to almost die and is just dramatic for no reason

The novel starts off really strong. The author clearly did their homework—going as far as using Google Maps to make the journey accurate, which I appreciated. But after that, it feels like all the effort just drops off. The main character gets nerfed hard, not just once, but twice. First, his powers are cut down significantly, and then his personality becomes so arrogant that he refuses to use his full abilities on weaker enemies, which just feels frustrating. Then the story takes an even weirder turn when his future self gives all his friends sequences (like in Lord of the Mysteries), and one of them becomes his frenemy, giving the MC a tougher enemy to deal with. It feels really forced. To top it off, there’s a huge inconsistency. In an earlier conversation between Lucian and Annabeth, it’s made clear that sequences are tailor-made and can’t just be handed out. But then Luke, with zero experience, can somehow mass-produce sequences? Seriously? How is making potions that turn you into a god suddenly so easy that anyone can do it with a few instructions?

My take on this fanfic is that the also had great aspirations however executed in badly. The MC got reincarnated and just like all those betta fanfictions, he started acting like a child immediately. Why can't he acts like his age of 20+ year old??? The author tries to explain it as the reasons for his softness is because he was an orphan in his previous lives and now he has a father and mother who loves him. But his juvenile acting and forgetfulness is still an issue for me. So I got to chapter 27 and I couldn't take it anymore and I stopped reading.