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RoKo505
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2024-04-12 05:28

I’m going to do a little self review as I’d like to at least have one review here. I hope I’m being fair to myself. Hope I’m being a little harsh. I think the grammar and writing structure could use some work even though I haven’t seen any major flaws. I believe the premise is good and the story is unique. However, I should be careful about the story pacing. There’s potential but only if done correctly. Hope you do well and continue to update. It would be great if you could update more often but I understand if you can’t. [img=Speechless] Overall I would say it’s enjoyable and readable as a novel.

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Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv6

I'm curious. what's with the "i want to die" turning into: "I'm alive?! okay then. live i shall! and I'll do a good job of it too!!!"

RoKo505
RoKo505Author

If you're talking about the beginning, he wanted to die yes. But that was because of the painful life he had and the cards he was dealt. He could have still tried to run away but he probably still would have died. For him who had nothing, there was no reason to try and live. But if he was given a completely new life, one much better than his last, I don’t know anyone who wouldn’t jump at the chance to be happy again. But that’s just my opinion. Thank you very much for reading!

Jack_Priper:I'm curious. what's with the "i want to die" turning into: "I'm alive?! okay then. live i shall! and I'll do a good job of it too!!!"
Full_time_Madman
Full_time_MadmanLv3

Bro, Why did you novel tittle like this? Any inspiration behind it?

RoKo505
RoKo505Author

Any inspiration behind it? Well, I wanted something short. I'm not too keen on titles that are extremely long. Then I didn't want it to be generic like “That time I died to a demon lord invasion so I reincarnated in another world to stop him.” Because the titles are reductive of the story, and the only goal in the end isn't the demon lord. So it needed to be short, sweet, original, and something that wasn't reductive of the plot. Hence “First To Reincarnate.” Its the start of the story, and the first origin point of everything that's currently happening. It describes the basis of the story without being too long. I like it. Don't you?

Full_time_Madman:Bro, Why did you novel tittle like this? Any inspiration behind it?
Full_time_Madman
Full_time_MadmanLv3

well to me, I more or less thought that Mc is first person in the universe to reincarnate... I generally thought like there are 1000s of mc getting reincarnating here and there so, are you sure that you mc is the First to reincarnate?

RoKo505:Any inspiration behind it? Well, I wanted something short. I'm not too keen on titles that are extremely long. Then I didn't want it to be generic like “That time I died to a demon lord invasion so I reincarnated in another world to stop him.” Because the titles are reductive of the story, and the only goal in the end isn't the demon lord. So it needed to be short, sweet, original, and something that wasn't reductive of the plot. Hence “First To Reincarnate.” Its the start of the story, and the first origin point of everything that's currently happening. It describes the basis of the story without being too long. I like it. Don't you?
RoKo505
RoKo505Author

Yeah. First to ever reincarnate with memories. First to reincarnate out of all those being sent. But if your talking about in the whole universe and multiverse. Of course he isn't. This worlds souls work on a reincarnation system. When people die they get reincarnated (their souls get new life, just without memories.) I've expressed that the entire world works on a reincarnation system in the story. But out of everyone sent to the fantasy world, Albion arrives 20 years early. Hence, he is… the First To Reincarnate.

Full_time_Madman:well to me, I more or less thought that Mc is first person in the universe to reincarnate... I generally thought like there are 1000s of mc getting reincarnating here and there so, are you sure that you mc is the First to reincarnate?
Edgelord_Sadboi
Edgelord_SadboiLv5

will there be any yuri in the harem? Its not my thing so I wanna ask early to avoid any misconceptions

RoKo505
RoKo505Author

If Yuri means guy-on-guy, then no. Sorry to disappoint anyone that was expecting that.

Edgelord_Sadboi:will there be any yuri in the harem? Its not my thing so I wanna ask early to avoid any misconceptions
aaron_randleas
aaron_randleasLv13

Yuri is girl-on-girl. Yaoi is guy-on-guy. They are Japanese words for specific homosexual content.

RoKo505:If Yuri means guy-on-guy, then no. Sorry to disappoint anyone that was expecting that.
RoKo505
RoKo505Author

Thank you. But there is no Yaoi and the only Yuri is between the harem, but it's not written, just implied.

aaron_randleas:Yuri is girl-on-girl. Yaoi is guy-on-guy. They are Japanese words for specific homosexual content.
Test_Misc
Test_MiscLv4

doesn't really change that it is still there, you should put the yuri tag in the tag section or write it at the end of synopsis so that people stop pestering your every time

RoKo505:Thank you. But there is no Yaoi and the only Yuri is between the harem, but it's not written, just implied.
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