Full_time_Madman

The writting is good and, the plot is interesting and, what even more better is that the MC THINKS before he does something not like others protagonist who goes around without even thinking about the consequences. I also like the MC being lustful.

First thing, I will say use simple worlds in conversation

"He should be mine, he definitely should be."

I don't why but I think this chapter could have written more betterly

shouldn't before it should have been like "Am I in love?" and, then that Would have been better, don't you think.

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Death and... me (Just like that novel or what?)

Looks like reborn in process

SIS, really?