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Dylan_Berneman
Dylan_BernemanLv46mth
2024-07-27 11:13

This story is absolutely amazing. The scientific approach to magic is well thought out and implemented as well as how the main character goes about conducting this experiment. The only issue with the story is that many names get misspelled such as one of the companies the mc creates. Also, the author confuses goblins with fairies. Other than that, this story is a fresh take on combining technology, magic, future ideas, and world building. I highly recommend people read this story!

Harry Potter: BE a GOD

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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

— Translation quality: ⭐️⭐️ — Updating stability: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ — Story development: ⭐️ — Character desing: ⭐️ —World background: ⭐️ ( why is fanfic). Thanks for the your work, translator. But the story is... very chinese, stranger, stupid and messy. The protagonist is autistic or suffers from a mental illness, since his unpredictable and psychotic behavior is totally inexplicable, which does nothing to help build or identify with his character. Maybe the fact that he was Asian in his other life is what makes him seem mentally ill and a danger to others.

1yr

Rin_Tachibana
Rin_TachibanaLv4

I thought it would be good so i have high hope but the MC is quite stupid. I don’t usually write low review but the MC irritates me.

7mth
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Title:... a God... So, trash. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

9mth
The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

What kind of brain rot is this synopsis

6mth
Arzt_Zar
Arzt_ZarLv1

anyone know mtl link for this novel..............................................................................................................

9mth
ChangedReviewer
ChangedReviewerLv4

I gave this a 1 / 5 a few weeks ago because I mistook it with another story. This story is actually really creative. NON OP MC Using science and involving muggle experts Using politics & outsmarting opponents instead of brute forcing it Actually this story is great. The translation is great too... not even that obvious that it's a chinese story. The translator does a great job localizing it by getting rid of a ton of chinese idioms. Overall this story is great. Might actually pay 5 bucks to read the rest on his patreon. Keep up the good work.

9mth
JCT
JCTLv4

ancient pavilion sounds china to me 🤦iits no for me

3mth
Kushina_UzumaKi
Kushina_UzumaKiLv12

There is a harem or there is only one heroine or there is none at all. **** Iensisneidneixneiznw8snsjsjsjxindizneizns8xnxinduxnduxjdudneidjdidh endreu mswuei nampi grsgvjekudjdjdududususuussuus

6mth
MonsterOfMercury
MonsterOfMercuryLv4

Do you mind sharing the raws? Please?......

6mth
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