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2024-05-01 22:29

I gave this a 1 / 5 a few weeks ago because I mistook it with another story. This story is actually really creative. NON OP MC Using science and involving muggle experts Using politics & outsmarting opponents instead of brute forcing it Actually this story is great. The translation is great too... not even that obvious that it's a chinese story. The translator does a great job localizing it by getting rid of a ton of chinese idioms. Overall this story is great. Might actually pay 5 bucks to read the rest on his patreon. Keep up the good work.

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Twice_James153
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xD

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Twice_James153:xD
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EyeOfSilver
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Meanwhile you the guy with no reviews?

Twice_James153:xD
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EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

XD? nah go back to twitter where racist trash like you belong

Twice_James153:xD
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Twice_James153
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Btw, congrats! You found the one review, where I generalized chinese story-writing. I did not even rate the novel where I left the comment on unfairly, like you did mine. And that's the problem with hyper-judgemental people online, that see one post, which can be interpreted as something bad and continue to paint the poster as worse than the devil...

EyeOfSilver:XD? nah go back to twitter where racist trash like you belong
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