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Plug_O_Stien
Plug_O_StienLv17mth
2024-05-24 20:07

I gave it a chance. Read ten chapters, found myself skimming through it by the end. The prose needs a lot of work, the scenes have no suspense and the overall story just doesn't have anything that warrents my continued interest. This kid is already 18 and still a nobody. If it was intentional, then that just means the author has no foresight. LEGENDS are the best, and they show it early on. Messi being a prime example. Him STARTING at 18 already makes him far worse then his competitors it terms of future fame. I'm disappointed with it, but it seems like a trend with sport novels. Every author botches the beginning.

Greatest Of All Legends

Sphire1707
3.7
499 Chs

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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

kay

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BryndenRivers
BryndenRiversLv13

You may not like it but he's right...

Sphire1707:kay
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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

kay

BryndenRivers:You may not like it but he's right...
5mth
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Kikuan
KikuanLv12

Agree

5mth
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GuiltyDream
GuiltyDreamLv15

He's expecting blue lock, but don't worry your book's objectively one the best sports books on here...

Sphire1707:kay
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2mth
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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

GuiltyDream:He's expecting blue lock, but don't worry your book's objectively one the best sports books on here...
2mth
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Ming_Chao
Ming_ChaoLv15

what I'm confused abt is how you have 4 hrs of reading but so many reviews with so many chapters read. 🤔

2mth
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Plug_O_Stien
Plug_O_StienLv1

For some reason it doesn't update. I don't know why, I'm on this sight daily.

Ming_Chao:what I'm confused abt is how you have 4 hrs of reading but so many reviews with so many chapters read. 🤔
2mth
1
Plug_O_Stien
Plug_O_StienLv1

I just checked, it counts hours spent reading on app only. Not on google which I use.

Ming_Chao:what I'm confused abt is how you have 4 hrs of reading but so many reviews with so many chapters read. 🤔
2mth
4
Uiop_god_0418
Uiop_god_0418Lv11

Ok Aussie

Plug_O_Stien:I just checked, it counts hours spent reading on app only. Not on google which I use.
1mth
YoungCreator
YoungCreatorLv4

If you open a chapter—you don’t even need to unlock it—and they you write a review. It reflects that you have read up to that chapter. Webnovel has to fix that!

Ming_Chao:what I'm confused abt is how you have 4 hrs of reading but so many reviews with so many chapters read. 🤔
1mth
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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

It's my book, soooo... I meannn... obviously 5 stars. But being honest, I believe that it's actually worth such a rating. If you like sports, then hop on for the ride, I guarantee you won't be disappointed, and well, there's a bit of romance as well if you want to see it. Also, this book doesn't have anything supernatural apart from the time regression/displacement at the beginning of the story, so if you fancy something like that, you could hop on the ride too. All in all, I think, it's a book you'll enjoy reading, so read, add it to your library, vote powerstones, leave a review and we'll all be happy. ... If not, I will find you, and force it down your... (Complete that sentence as you will)

10mth

Kelvin_Sekwati
Kelvin_SekwatiLv12

Absolutely love this novel. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS please author 😢 🙏🏻 Also don't drop this amazing piece of work and break our hearts. Thanks

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Tsetth
TsetthLv14

I'm at chapter 107 and I have to say I'm enjoying the story. Characters are great including the mc, and the pace is fantastic. The games are exciting as well and I find myself feeling similar to how I would feel watching a live match. Which is quite impressive on the authors part as this could make or break the story. Thankfully it was done well. 5/5.

8mth
Uskalski_Yuchiha
Uskalski_YuchihaLv3

it's an African American mc,we gettin contracted with PSG on this one 🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥

10mth
Saurfangs
SaurfangsLv4

It’s a nice book but come on man a simple match can take at least 10 chapters why the annoying part is even the matches he doesn’t participate in take about 7 chapters You are just wording your shit so you can get more chapters for your novel As at 300 chapters nothing significant has happened in the story mind you it’s not that it’s a slow story it’s just that it’s at a normal pace but author just can’t summarize a simple scenario but tend to increase his wordings so that he can gain more chapters A single match can take 15 chapters alone why what at all are you trying to right here Read greatest of all time ans see how the author summarizes most of his writings

3mth
Edgar_Luna_7132
Edgar_Luna_7132Lv4

I don't know why but sometimes it's hard to read the couple the MC is with, it's not worth it at the beginning everything is fine, after his visit everything falls apart I don't know why I feel that her partner slept with Maylo sometimes he feels more like the protagonist, Adele has more chemistry with MC they are a nice couple.

4mth
YoungCreator
YoungCreatorLv4

This is the 1st competitive sport book I've read, and I assure you it's the best! You should really try it out! 5 stars! Why not?

7mth
Hans_1040
Hans_1040Lv12

Deteriorated from ch 247 onwards. Ruined the romance aspect of the novel. Too much match details, one match can take 10 chapters. It reads more like a football journal (play-by-play) analysis.

3mth
Reviewed
ReviewedLv11

Ntr always 1 star🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤨🤮🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨e hh

1mth
BryndenRivers
BryndenRiversLv13

Boring and unrealistic

5mth
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