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Saurfangs
SaurfangsLv47mth
2024-09-04 16:03

It’s a nice book but come on man a simple match can take at least 10 chapters why the annoying part is even the matches he doesn’t participate in take about 7 chapters You are just wording your shit so you can get more chapters for your novel As at 300 chapters nothing significant has happened in the story mind you it’s not that it’s a slow story it’s just that it’s at a normal pace but author just can’t summarize a simple scenario but tend to increase his wordings so that he can gain more chapters A single match can take 15 chapters alone why what at all are you trying to right here Read greatest of all time ans see how the author summarizes most of his writings

Greatest Of All Legends

Sphire1707
3.7
617 Chs

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nightfury1720
nightfury1720Lv11

well the author should write a 1 page novel where at the first line he gets a system and by the end of the page he gets a ballan d or, I am sure that would please you after all what is story development world building personality training arcs, total bs

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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

It's my book, soooo... I meannn... obviously 5 stars. But being honest, I believe that it's actually worth such a rating. If you like sports, then hop on for the ride, I guarantee you won't be disappointed, and well, there's a bit of romance as well if you want to see it. Also, this book doesn't have anything supernatural apart from the time regression/displacement at the beginning of the story, so if you fancy something like that, you could hop on the ride too. All in all, I think, it's a book you'll enjoy reading, so read, add it to your library, vote powerstones, leave a review and we'll all be happy. ... If not, I will find you, and force it down your... (Complete that sentence as you will)

1yr

Kelvin_Sekwati
Kelvin_SekwatiLv12

Absolutely love this novel. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS please author 😢 🙏🏻 Also don't drop this amazing piece of work and break our hearts. Thanks

1yr
Tsetth
TsetthLv14

I'm at chapter 107 and I have to say I'm enjoying the story. Characters are great including the mc, and the pace is fantastic. The games are exciting as well and I find myself feeling similar to how I would feel watching a live match. Which is quite impressive on the authors part as this could make or break the story. Thankfully it was done well. 5/5.

11mth
Plug_O_Stien
Plug_O_StienLv1

I gave it a chance. Read ten chapters, found myself skimming through it by the end. The prose needs a lot of work, the scenes have no suspense and the overall story just doesn't have anything that warrents my continued interest. This kid is already 18 and still a nobody. If it was intentional, then that just means the author has no foresight. LEGENDS are the best, and they show it early on. Messi being a prime example. Him STARTING at 18 already makes him far worse then his competitors it terms of future fame. I'm disappointed with it, but it seems like a trend with sport novels. Every author botches the beginning.

10mth
Reviewed
ReviewedLv11

Ntr always 1 star🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤨🤮🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨e hh

5mth
Edgar_Luna_7132
Edgar_Luna_7132Lv4

I don't know why but sometimes it's hard to read the couple the MC is with, it's not worth it at the beginning everything is fine, after his visit everything falls apart I don't know why I feel that her partner slept with Maylo sometimes he feels more like the protagonist, Adele has more chemistry with MC they are a nice couple.

8mth
Hans_1040
Hans_1040Lv12

Deteriorated from ch 247 onwards. Ruined the romance aspect of the novel. Too much match details, one match can take 10 chapters. It reads more like a football journal (play-by-play) analysis.

7mth
Villain_in_Glasses
Villain_in_GlassesLv14

F this NTR shit. Feels like I wasted my time reading up to now.

5mth
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Ntr 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

5mth
YoungCreator
YoungCreatorLv4

This is the 1st competitive sport book I've read, and I assure you it's the best! You should really try it out! 5 stars! Why not?

11mth
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