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Mastarius
MastariusLv211mth
2024-02-06 01:40

bruh i can tolerate nerfs like adding limitations to broken devil fruits or conditions to it's utility i mean if you can just copy all devil fruits it's too broken and even bad grammar and lame Chinese CN wording, but why would eating Kopi Kopi no Mi heal mc fragile health? it's too dumb there's no excuse it's not even a plot hole it's just author being a retard person or ai... this author .... is it even human? or some ai product?

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ChaosWriter
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Ron was born prematurely that's why his health was not upto the standard. The Copy-Copy Fruit in this FF is a Special Paramecia type DF. Why isn't it possible that in addition to allow him to copy other DF's, the fruit also boosted his body slightly? And can you tell me where did you find the grammer bad? Or Chinese elements in the chapters? I've tried my best to deliver quality chapters and eliminate most of the Chinese elements that readers don't like. If you found some mistakes, please point it out in the Paragraph comments and I will correct them right away.

AspiringPedo
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You must have some EXTREME ocd if just that’s enough for you to one star this💀

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ChaosWriter
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Now that this FF has more than 15 Chaps posted, I've decided to post a review explaining some things. Firstly, this FF is a translation and edited version of another FF from faloo. You can find the MTL version on mtlnation which has a total of 82 chapters. And on faloo, this FF has 211 chapters, although chapters are locked from chapter 50 onwards. MTL name:- Navigation: The New King Of The Whitebeard Group, Copying The Phoenix At The Beginning Faloo Name:- 航海:白团新皇,开局复制不死鸟 I am from India. And the two options for charging coins on Faloo, WechatPay and Alipay, are not available in my country. Also, I am lazy to reseach alternate methods to recharge and unlock further chapters after chapter 82 which as stated in the last chap available on mtlnation. So, I have decided to continue the FF after Chapter 82 in my own way. Till chapter 37, I haven't seen a hint of chinese nationalism that are usually present in Chinese novels and FF. Even while editing, I mostly remove the chinese elements like calling your friend with a prefix like 'Brother'. Anothing important thing, the MC is not a Young Master. I repeat, the MC is not a Young Master. He has a likeable character and at least I am enjoying this FF while translating and editing it. Lastly, if there's no romance introduced by the original FF Author by chapter 82, I have decided to add romance with my prefered character. Even then, you can suggest with whom you want the romance to be with. If you are convicing enough, I might change my mind.😜 By the way, there will be no Harem. If you have any questions, you can ask here. I will try my best to answer them.

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