the fruit is quite unrealistic, but I won't judge and will try to give it a chance, I just hope that at least the protagonist strives to reach his limits.

Shameless 5 stars for joining the Whitebeard Pirates and copying the Phoenix Devil Fruit which is my favorite devil fruit of the entire series lol

I really liked this translation, I hope it doesn't drop. To this point, 14 chapters have been posted, I can't say much about the development of the story, but I really liked how the dynamics in the fourth division are being explored and it's good to see Ace's life in Whitebeard's crew. Thank you for the translating work, the grammar is OK, take my 5 stars here!

one of the few one piece fanfics that is actually enjoyable to read with the author doing an awesome job shaping the story and adding his own elements

eu gostei bastante dessa fic, é difícil ver uma fic de one piece que o MC n é capitão e sim subordinado.

I’ve really been enjoying the story so far. It’s cool that it started in the new world, unlike most fanfics that begin in the smaller seas and take ages to get interesting. I’m hooked and excited to see how it all plays out.

Didn't have much expectation tbh, but you proved me wrong. The way that the power ups of Ron is being made and although he became strong but not too strong to the point that it became repetitive and boring. Hoping to have more chapters available!!

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