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2024-01-24 04:18

I’ve really been enjoying the story so far. It’s cool that it started in the new world, unlike most fanfics that begin in the smaller seas and take ages to get interesting. I’m hooked and excited to see how it all plays out.

One Piece: Copying The Phoenix Fruit At The Beginning

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ChaosWriter
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Now that this FF has more than 15 Chaps posted, I've decided to post a review explaining some things. Firstly, this FF is a translation and edited version of another FF from faloo. You can find the MTL version on mtlnation which has a total of 82 chapters. And on faloo, this FF has 211 chapters, although chapters are locked from chapter 50 onwards. MTL name:- Navigation: The New King Of The Whitebeard Group, Copying The Phoenix At The Beginning Faloo Name:- 航海：白团新皇，开局复制不死鸟 I am from India. And the two options for charging coins on Faloo, WechatPay and Alipay, are not available in my country. Also, I am lazy to reseach alternate methods to recharge and unlock further chapters after chapter 82 which as stated in the last chap available on mtlnation. So, I have decided to continue the FF after Chapter 82 in my own way. Till chapter 37, I haven't seen a hint of chinese nationalism that are usually present in Chinese novels and FF. Even while editing, I mostly remove the chinese elements like calling your friend with a prefix like 'Brother'. Anothing important thing, the MC is not a Young Master. I repeat, the MC is not a Young Master. He has a likeable character and at least I am enjoying this FF while translating and editing it. Lastly, if there's no romance introduced by the original FF Author by chapter 82, I have decided to add romance with my prefered character. Even then, you can suggest with whom you want the romance to be with. If you are convicing enough, I might change my mind.😜 By the way, there will be no Harem. If you have any questions, you can ask here. I will try my best to answer them.

1yr

meHzyk
meHzykLv4

the fruit is quite unrealistic, but I won't judge and will try to give it a chance, I just hope that at least the protagonist strives to reach his limits.

1yr
JacobtheUsher
JacobtheUsherLv4

Shameless 5 stars for joining the Whitebeard Pirates and copying the Phoenix Devil Fruit which is my favorite devil fruit of the entire series lol

11mth
Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3

I really liked this translation, I hope it doesn't drop. To this point, 14 chapters have been posted, I can't say much about the development of the story, but I really liked how the dynamics in the fourth division are being explored and it's good to see Ace's life in Whitebeard's crew. Thank you for the translating work, the grammar is OK, take my 5 stars here!

1yr
Nonya_Business_2991
Nonya_Business_2991Lv4

one of the few one piece fanfics that is actually enjoyable to read with the author doing an awesome job shaping the story and adding his own elements

11mth
Aurelion_Sol_5284
Aurelion_Sol_5284Lv3

eu gostei bastante dessa fic, é difícil ver uma fic de one piece que o MC n é capitão e sim subordinado.

11mth
DaoistIs8uXQ
DaoistIs8uXQLv1

Didn't have much expectation tbh, but you proved me wrong. The way that the power ups of Ron is being made and although he became strong but not too strong to the point that it became repetitive and boring. Hoping to have more chapters available!!

11mth
Aurelion_Sol_5284
Aurelion_Sol_5284Lv3

Reveal spoiler

11mth
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