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_Wint3r_
_Wint3r_Author11mth
2024-01-02 20:56

As tradition, I the author must leave a review! This fic is a long time coming and something I have been planning for months now, I fell in love with reading a lot of the fanfics on here (even the ones that aren't that well written) and I had the urge to write one myself! This fanfic will cover at least till the end of Shippuden (maybe more?) and will begin before the canon starts, our MC is someone who will develop and change a LOT from the beginning so if you don't like him at the start, just hang on for a chapter or two and see how he changes. I don't know as of now if I can write romance, I am confident in writing most other stuff but that's one part I'll put off until our MC is of age, and it will be age-appropriate (as our MC is a transmigrated individual). No harem, unless there are lots of people who ask for it, even then I can only max it out at two. Thank you all for reading this far and I hope you all find it worthwhile to add to your collection! Leave us a review and a comment if you can and happy reading! Enjoy!

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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Is mc going to be an all rounder Hope not Also romance ?

_Wint3r_
_Wint3r_Author

I can't speak of the MC's abilities in the future as it may spoil the fic for some, what I can say however is that he won't be a jack of all trades. There will be some things he is good at and some things he doesn't have much ability in, I hope that answers your question. The romance part, I'm not sure yet, I want to improve my writing by getting this fic to a lot more chapters before I introduce something like that, what I can say however is that I won't be adding a Harem, if people want it I might be able to stretch it to two but that's pushing it already haha.

Romance_guy:Is mc going to be an all rounder Hope not Also romance ?
APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS
APOCALYPTIC_NOVELSLv4

please harem I appreciate you making it realistic but please harem 🙏

_Wint3r_:I can't speak of the MC's abilities in the future as it may spoil the fic for some, what I can say however is that he won't be a jack of all trades. There will be some things he is good at and some things he doesn't have much ability in, I hope that answers your question. The romance part, I'm not sure yet, I want to improve my writing by getting this fic to a lot more chapters before I introduce something like that, what I can say however is that I won't be adding a Harem, if people want it I might be able to stretch it to two but that's pushing it already haha.
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_Wint3r_
_Wint3r_Author

Something like romance and especially harem is a LONG ways away, depending on how the story is at that time, I’ll choose a path forward. Keep in mind that I want this to be realistic, very realistic, if harem will break that immersion, I can’t do it. But who knows, maybe in the future the story will call for it.

APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS:please harem I appreciate you making it realistic but please harem 🙏
APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS
APOCALYPTIC_NOVELSLv4

it's okay bro as long as the mc is not too unbearable and stupid it's okay but I was thinking have you watched invincible 🤔 if yes can you consider making an invincible fanfiction not a lot of invincible fanfiction out there, if not its fine

_Wint3r_:Something like romance and especially harem is a LONG ways away, depending on how the story is at that time, I’ll choose a path forward. Keep in mind that I want this to be realistic, very realistic, if harem will break that immersion, I can’t do it. But who knows, maybe in the future the story will call for it.
_Wint3r_
_Wint3r_Author

Until this one's done or I have a lot of chapters stacked up I probably won't start any other fics, I want to improve my writing with this fic before I start another one haha

APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS:it's okay bro as long as the mc is not too unbearable and stupid it's okay but I was thinking have you watched invincible 🤔 if yes can you consider making an invincible fanfiction not a lot of invincible fanfiction out there, if not its fine
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APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS
APOCALYPTIC_NOVELSLv4

it's okay mn your good 😁👌🏾👍🏾

_Wint3r_:Until this one's done or I have a lot of chapters stacked up I probably won't start any other fics, I want to improve my writing with this fic before I start another one haha
Aukima_3246
Aukima_3246Lv14

No Harem please

FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

What kind of moral alignment does the MC have at the start and if its going to change, in which direction?

Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv4

So you mentioned other Naruto fics aren't to your preference so I gotta ask, what is your preference then?

_Wint3r_:I can't speak of the MC's abilities in the future as it may spoil the fic for some, what I can say however is that he won't be a jack of all trades. There will be some things he is good at and some things he doesn't have much ability in, I hope that answers your question. The romance part, I'm not sure yet, I want to improve my writing by getting this fic to a lot more chapters before I introduce something like that, what I can say however is that I won't be adding a Harem, if people want it I might be able to stretch it to two but that's pushing it already haha.
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_Wint3r_
_Wint3r_Author

I do like them it's just that oftentimes they lead to a fanfic where the MC is kage level by age 8, not that OP characters are worse, I just prefer slow-burn stories with believable development. My personal favourites include Outsiders Resolve and Wind Calamity, the former is my favourite.

Kamikaze_Eagle:So you mentioned other Naruto fics aren't to your preference so I gotta ask, what is your preference then?
_Wint3r_
_Wint3r_Author

The same alignment that your average 17-year-old human on this planet would have, and it will develop and change massively in this new world. More pragmatic but not cold-blooded, I don't want to spoil any more haha.

FinnsRevenge:What kind of moral alignment does the MC have at the start and if its going to change, in which direction?
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Outsider's resolve is your favorite? The top five reviews for it don't give me hope

_Wint3r_:I do like them it's just that oftentimes they lead to a fanfic where the MC is kage level by age 8, not that OP characters are worse, I just prefer slow-burn stories with believable development. My personal favourites include Outsiders Resolve and Wind Calamity, the former is my favourite.
_Wint3r_
_Wint3r_Author

I know, I dived in solely because it had superior writing (in terms of the flow and vocabulary) and do not regret it one bit. Realistic MC, great plot progression and a slow but definite increase in strength, IMO, it is the best fanfic I've read, or at least my favourite. The MC doesn't really "win" until chap 30 and is only "strong" even later, if you can handle that, I highly recommend it. My only gripe is the MC is a little boring at times, that's why I do my best to make Aoki seem fun.

FinnsRevenge:Outsider's resolve is your favorite? The top five reviews for it don't give me hope
Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

#Noharem#Single_female_lead

_Wint3r_
_Wint3r_Author

Most likely

Azathoth2:#Noharem#Single_female_lead
Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

_Wint3r_:Most likely
ywhy4_
ywhy4_Lv4

APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS:please harem I appreciate you making it realistic but please harem 🙏
APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS
APOCALYPTIC_NOVELSLv4

ywhy4_:
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Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

No Harem and Late Romance not until he us physically 18.

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